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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 12:05 CST
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Get to the bottom of this? Oh good. Now why did Duo go to Hilde and not Quatre. He did have a mental breakdown listening to Hilde hector him...I don't know, sounds potentially fishy either way. It's really becoming gripping. Your description of a veteran Heero was spot on. WHoever is messing with Duo better not try to pull a fast one on his ex-partner (yeah, as if that's all he is, right, Heero, go on fooling yourself). Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, please write more! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 02, 2004 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more that wasn't enought Please update again soon...This is a great story...^_~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 19:14 CST
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I liked Quatre's phone call, the way he sees right through Heero but doesn't call him out, merely offers support and suggestions without seeming to and then leaves Heero to figure it out. So Duo is still capable of flashes of lucidity. Sounds like something pretty bad happened when he went to walk the dog though. Can't wait for next chapter! (Oh, and it's tensile strength, tinsel is the sort of stuff you hang on christmas trees :D )
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 11, 2004 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was a great chapter I really love this story!!! Please update again soon....
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 23:35 CST
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Great new chapter. Once more, Heero is very IC, even through the utterly bewildering (and somehow amusing) situation of having a dirty, mentally disturbed killer napping under his desk. I liked Heero's warning to the gang; it wasn't boasting either. And the way he approached his own appartement like a 'safehouse' was amusing but also eery; how much did Heero think the same way when he aquired it? Anyway, definitely getting hooked, hope to see this continued!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 17, 2004 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story ...I can't wait to read more please update again soon....
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 20:52 CST
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I'm already hooked. I don't know how you do it, but you always manage to present a new, different side to Heero and Duo every time you start a fanfic. Heero smoking came as a bit of a surprise to me. Normally I don't condone that, but Heero smoking is just...sexy. Mrow. :3 Hahahaha. He's so cool and confident. Okay, okay, enough rambling. Can't wait for the next part.
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Title: Ani Anime
Reviewed By: Ani Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always your writing is incredible. The story is not that original but when you write it is always an enjoyable read. The characters stay true and the written imagery easy to follow. You are one of my favorite writers on the fan fic circuit.
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Reviewed By: Devina On: February 09, 2004 09:49 CST
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oh my poor Duo *sob* *snif* *beowaaaaaaaaaahhhbboooeeeeh!* *snif* you just have to continiu *snif* or i wont stop crying *snif* *^^*
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Reviewed By: Aoede On: January 29, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sounds interesting so far. *nods* =)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 29, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start I can't wait to read more....
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@aol.com On: January 29, 2004 14:28 CST
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You've made my day! I am so looking forward to another of your delicious fics. I liked the logical, cool feel to Heero. I also liked that he was ambitious and a little spoiled. It was nice to Duo's energy and drive wasn't being wasted, too, although given the set up...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 12:17 CST
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Oh wow, you've started another fic! Hmm, you will be finishing Soldier Boys, right? I'm impressed. You've drawn numerous character studies of Heero and Duo in your previous fics. I'm really amazed you could find yet a new slant to their personality that I had not actually thought of, but once I read it here, I thought: Heero as a cut-throat business man, getting his thrills that way and keeping to his vow of no longer killing? But of course! Heh, signs of a good writer, making something new into something that seems obvious and natural to the reader. Anyway, I'm very curious, of course, to know what happened to Duo. But so far, your Heero is more interesting, his mixture of hard-edged practicality is pleasingly close to the canon version, as well as his view of Duo in the past. He really was thinking of calling the cops...good thing for us he didn't. I hope you add to this soon I'm curious to see where it's going.
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Reviewed By: Chimera Dragon On: January 29, 2004 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this and I believe that you should continue it. I can't wait to read the next chapter as soon as you get it out.
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