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Reviewed By: lyn On: July 26, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic,and i think it's getting better with each new chapter,at first i thought that the guys were a little out of character,but it seems that the more u write,the more u get to know them better. i loved this last chapter (although chap 6 was.....omg...),your writing was particularly beautiful.so keep on going like this.luv,lyn
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Title: Cruel Paradise
Reviewed By: me On: July 20, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reluctant to give full marks until I've gone over it again. Anyway, thank you for this fic! I was beginning to wonder if I would ever find a good 'they get together' scene in a fic. It's hard enough finding Mirage of Blaze fanfiction as it is.
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Reviewed By: Nk On: July 13, 2004 06:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK, I am of course thrilled to see this finally posted and am very much looking forward to more! I adore how you write this pair, and am intrigued by the apperance of Kousaka (who wouldn't be, he is gorgeous, hehe)and am awaiting the rest of the story. What happens from here? Is Yuzuru duped into actions he shouldn't be? How does this affect Naoe and Takaya? More! On a side note, a mention wasn't needed and makes me blush. (Oh, not really, I can't blush for real!) Thanks.
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Reviewed By: B On: July 11, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I just love this fic !! I love the romance of it and the action!! I cant wait for the next chapter!! Please keep it going, its one of the best fics I've ever read. I think I must have read this 8 times just waiting for updates :) Thanks again!! Great job !!
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Reviewed By: Got no name... On: July 09, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh. I'm so biased when rating... But *gurgles* I can't express how fascinated I am by this fic, and how everyone's feelings can move me, so that I feel what they're feeling and so strongly. *grin* And I hope you will continue writing with enthusiasm... cause I know I'll be awaiting the next chapter somewhat impatiently. :)
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Reviewed By: wilyfox34 On: July 09, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never have I been so taken with a fic that I sit and read it in one sitting. This story is that good. I was pleased to see that you remained true to the characters. Your last chapter left me wanting more and soon. Yes, I'm not surprised that the slimey Kousaka was behind Yuzura's most recent actions. Don't they all no that nothing will come between the Taka-Kag/Naoe relationship. I can't criticize because I loved this story from beginning to end. Update soon.
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Title: eee!
Reviewed By: Banshee Puppet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kousaka!!!! Soo cool. hah. I'm psyched. He's a slithery little reptile of a man, but I like him! This story is still my fav, so keep it up!
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Title: Cool fic!
Reviewed By: Yuzuki On: June 14, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a brilliant fic! The storyline is awesome. I actually laughed at Yuzuru's density in Chapter 3 when he's with Saori. XD I'm not worried that he'll hurt you, I'm worried that he LIKES you! Sheesh. XDXD OMG, that line was great! I enjoy your fanfic thoroughly so far. I have yet to read the rest of the chapters. I'm sure I won't be disappointed. ^_^
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Reviewed By: HogwortsFire On: May 21, 2004 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best Mirage of Blaze fic I've ever read. In fact, one of the best fics of all time. I love this! It's one of my favorites because not only is it interesting and keeps me coming back for more, but you stay so true to the characters' personalities, which is fantastic. Write more soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Foreverlace [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story. It was awesome. The DVD'S are awesome. Give me more.
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Reviewed By: Sanada On: May 15, 2004 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic! Please add another chapter soon k? You are doing great with writing this!
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Reviewed By: Floretta On: May 14, 2004 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never would have guessed this was your first fan fic. You are doing a wonderful job. This fic is hot!hot!hot! I am a *HUGE* fan of MoB and was glad that someone has finally given this wonderful anime the star treatment. I have read some fics (Mostly oneshot) but this is the longest and most incredible MoB fic that I have ever read. Everything about this fic rings true. Everyone is in character and the intimate moments are intense and hot. JUst what you would expect after 400 years. My thought would be that Naoe would never let Kagetora (Takaya) leave his bed after waiting so long to get him there. This is a great, great fic. As long as you continue to write I will continue to read. I can't wait for the next chapter update.
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Reviewed By: Banshee Puppet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 00:06 CDT
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Awesome fic. It's good to see MoB here on mediaminer, means less random web searches for me. Such a hard fandom to obsess over when there are so few fics but this one is really good and is going right to my fav stories list! I love your characterizations, and you're writing style flows very naturally--simple, but elegant and very easy to get caught up in. Takaya is a stubborn fool, as always, but we probably wouldn't love him half as much if he wasn't! heh. Keep up the great work. I shall patiently await future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: April 24, 2004 14:19 CDT
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THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. I was about to go nuts from the suspense. You really know how to write a steamy fanfic for this anime. The story has an excellent blend of angst/romance. Keep up the wonderful work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: NK On: April 24, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT HOT HOT! Wow, what a great chapter, you keep on writting, and I'll keep on reading. I love the dynamics between these two, and your fluid writting style adds so much to the story. It doesn't detract from the characters, emotions, and I love that I always feel I can "see" whats going on, instead of going, now how were they again? Brilliant.
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