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Reviewed By: Sinnesspiel On: August 04, 2005 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope you actually finish this; looking forward to future chapters. I just read through all of these tonight and will be left likely months wondering what happens--brutally unfair. But that's just so on par with the series itself, isn't it...?
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Reviewed By: Zega [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is thr greatest fan fic for Mirage of Blaze that I've ever read! Please update soon! I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Silveriss On: June 05, 2005 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. I'm looking forward to your update. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: lyn On: March 24, 2005 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
an update!!!yay!!i luv this chap,butr at the same time i agree with naoe,i'm sick of yuzuru...and kosaka too!i'm just wondering where r u going with this story....but i'll continue to read your fics! luv,lyn oh!i've made a mob fanart!check it if u liek in: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14331189/
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Reviewed By: mdfang On: March 04, 2005 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this series!! Keep writing. Any chance for a crossover story from your fertile mind?
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: February 24, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, what an unexpected thrill to check in for updates and find one posted. This story is one of my favorites. I forgive you for taking so long to update. ^ _ ^ It sure has brightned up my work day! These guys need to get their feelings & relationships worked out. Naoe is so jealous he can't think straight & Takaya isn't helping the situation any by not reassuring him of his feelings for Naoe. Then there's Chiaki and Yuzura! Chiaki needs to just grab that boy and lay a lip-locker on him big time (oh, the yaoi yumminess)!!! ^ _ ^ Kousaka just needs his butt kicked for being such a meddling SOB. Well, thanks for the fine chapter and please post again soon.
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Title: weeeeeee it's updated!!!!
Reviewed By: muraki_rose21 On: February 23, 2005 18:12 CST
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u rock!!!!yeah u updated i'm sooooooo happy i almost lost hope that u wouldn't continue...thank-god that's not the case...i luv ur story i think it's the best mob i've read so far!! i luv the way u portray Naoe...sooo insanely jealous....what's gonna happen to Yuzuru eeeee I can't wait!!!!!!! pls update soon ...gomen for being so impatient.....
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Title: sexy...
Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this story. the fact that Takaya has finally, at least in some form, accepted Naoe is wonderfully gratifying to a yaoi-fan like me. and mirage of blaze is such an awesome anime that it makes it that much better. at any rate, hopefully you update this soon so i can find out what happens to Naoe!
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Title: holy #@*&*! this is amazing
Reviewed By: muraki_rose21 On: January 23, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowo wow this is great i got so hooked on this story (this would have been great if they animated this he he...)pls write more soon i'm sure everyone is excited and eager to know what is goin to happen next P.S> YEAH!!! Naoe's sooooooooooooo sexy!!!!>_
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Reviewed By: lyn On: November 15, 2004 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh,what a cliffhanger!i liked this last chapter,and i'm happy that u updated,i was starting to think u wouldnt!i know i'm annoying,but please updat soon,i cant wait to read what happened to naoe! luv,lyn
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Title: masterpiece!! with the sex part.. ho ho ho
Reviewed By: lovelywhiteseven On: November 05, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was like a masterpiece! it's been a while seen I've enjoyed a fanfic this much. plz update soon. I'll die in my mind if u dun continue...
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: October 30, 2004 14:25 CDT
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Oh, wow, you sure know how to leave a person in suspense,don't you?!?!?!?!?!? Its great to see you posting more chapters for this fic. Thanks for the good job you're doing with the storyline. There just aren't enough fanfics on the Net to do the crew from M.o.B. justice. If you write it then I will definitely read it. YYYAAAAHHH!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 (floretta) On: October 27, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it appears the action has just intensified. Finally a peek into the nastsy agenda of Kousaka. I found it entertaining when Takaya was threatening Kou. Wow! The way you write you can feel how much Yuzura hates Naoe. The hints of Minako was inspired makes you wonder if Kou will reveal more or at least force answers from Naoe. The ending left me anxious. Will Naoe be okay? Now I am so looking forward to the next update. Lots of action and quite the enjoyable chapter. I loved every moment of it. Update soon because my heart breaks for Takaya. He needs to know that Naoe is okay and so do I. This story is one of the best that I have read.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Banshee Puppet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 06:19 CDT
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ah, you've made my day. i woke up to find a new chapter of this story. hah. well, i can't complain about untimely updates though, because I'm just as bad. Keep up the good work! Hee. Chiaki amuses me. And such a cliffy! Poor Naoe. I anxiously await future chapters. Cheers and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: LC On: September 23, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmh,i was wondering....since this is fiction and all that....so u can do what u want....ehhhh... CAN U JUST KILL YUZURU??!?!? i'm amazed,u actually made me hate yuzuru!wow!congratulations!=P please update soon!! LC
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