| "Stressfull Day's" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: Comments On: May 13, 2004 01:39 CDT
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Your spelling problems are quite annoying. Please get a spell checker. Also, in the manga Kagome almost never sits Inuyasha more than once at one time. In the five years that the manga has been produced, there are only about three occasions where Kagome sat Inuyasha multiple times in a row and she only did it three times in a row when she did. It is out of character for her to sit him twenty times in a row like you have her do all the time.
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Reviewed By: Please fix it. On: May 13, 2004 00:59 CDT
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Chapter 2 and 3 are exactly the same. Please fix it because it makes chapter 4 confusing. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Specter97 On: May 11, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi
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Title: Why whoever created Internet should burn in hell
Reviewed By: Kalika142 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 15:07 CDT
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To all my fic fans: My PC at home wont let me on the internet, so thebest I can do is to type chapters at school and get the on by there, and the little problem with that is that my last day is May 14, in like three days. And if my luck gets any worse, You MIGHT have to wait until summer is over...*ducks and hides* UNLESS MY GRANDMA AND EVIL UNCLE WILL LET ME ON!! *gets up and looks around*...ok...*ducks a rock* HEY! !ANYWAY! This is a Just so you know kinda thing. Laterz -Kalika-sama
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Reviewed By: KIBAYBA On: May 11, 2004 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOve the story but what's with the spelling?????!!!!!It irks me so......BUT goooooooooooooooooddddddddd ggggggggggggrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttttt story (fix the spelling as in spelling check but love the story).
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Reviewed By: starynite On: May 03, 2004 18:12 CDT
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I just stumbled across your fic today and read the whole thing straight through. I loved it. I hope you update soon.
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Title: ^______^
Reviewed By: Ani_girl7789 On: April 30, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh.... i really like this story... especially how youkai adopt an unlike species... but poor kagome!! her friends were on the phone while doing it!!! i would personally kill them!!!!
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Reviewed By: earthgirl250 On: April 30, 2004 16:15 CDT
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it's a really good fic and if youlike inu/ka romances, this is one of the best!
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Title: Updates
Reviewed By: Kalika142 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 12:42 CDT
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Hi to all of my adoring fans....*cough* ANYWAYS-if yoru wondering why it says I've updated and there are no chapters, its because i'm fixing the spelling and grammer on them, I am working on another chapter, but since everyone is telling me that I have such shitty spelling and grammer, i'm fixing it up for ya! YAY! Laterz!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you better up date and fast if you know whats good for you!!!!!! PLEASE THAT WAS THE SADEST CLIFY EVER! i need to knwo what happens!
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Title: cool stuff
Reviewed By: write more (not logged in) On: April 28, 2004 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE PLEASE! its great! i love the story its awesome. why did inutaisho have to be so mean?! kag haveing kids at 18?! wow but cool
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Title: Spectre97
Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well "dog dude" your grammar really blows. What you did was not a flame but it was a down right insult. A flame is something the writer can use. You just need to pull your head out of your ass man. And don't try to puff up to me puppy,get a life and don't come back.
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Reviewed By: dog dude On: April 25, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur spelling really really really really bbbblllooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh ya kagomes freind yuki is spelt yuki not yukai
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Title: YAYYYY!!!!!
Reviewed By: Caliko (not signed in) On: April 24, 2004 23:14 CDT
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ABOUT TIME!!!! LOL.. anyway, Glad to see you hung in there! Good turn with the story, btw. InuYasha HAD to have some really harsh feelings somewhere about his father showing up out of the blue. Dad suddenly acting like a father was sure to bring SOMETHING out in the open! ~Caliko
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Title: korisovra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Korisovra Ti'Kildust On: April 22, 2004 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pairings and the overall storyline are great. Imaginitive, different, and workable. But start using Microsoft Word or something, please. Or a spell and grammar check. Anything lol I'm not being mean or anything because, hell, even though it's really really bad with the grammar and spelling it's still good enough for me to read. (Very rare, most of the time if a fic isn't nearly perfect I stop there and refuse to read any further.)I've seen worse since ff.net went kiddieland on all of us anyways lol
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