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Title: cool Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 21, 2004 19:18 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yay way to stand up! woo, don't let him take shit from anyone! UPDATE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 13:40 CDT Comment/Review: this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: animechik89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 21:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i feel ur pain about the aol crisis. lol its a merical i can actualy get online these days. well good luck with the writers block!! Keep it up!!!!! ^_____^ ~animechik89
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Title: caliko Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:55 CDT Comment/Review: ok.. i have NO ideas.. but this is what I want you to do... 1) Grab a piece of paper and go into a quiet room with no distractions. 2)write down how you want the story to end, then jot down what NEEDS to happen for it to end like that (realistically, not half-assed or rushed) 3)imagine the last chappie in your head, like your watching a movie 4)Try to let it go on, past the point you left off 5)WRITE IT DOWN QUICKLY - not detailed paragraphs, just the main idea of what happens 6) do it again, this time ending where #4 leaves off, repeat #5, ect. ect. Once you have a basic idea of what has to happen in the next chappie, you can begin with a rough draft of paragraphs.. flesh it out, add dialouge and description, maybe some comic relief to help you relax a bit. I'm sorry i couldn't give you any ideas.. i'm basically going through the same thing on my fic. have the beg. and the end of chapter 5 done, but the middle is empty. ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: March 25, 2004 22:02 CST Comment/Review: I'm still enjoying your story, and look forward to your next update, which I can only hope will be soon. To answer Skiddy16's question, a beta reader is someone who reads the story/chapter before it is posted, to check for typos and to make sure the events don't conflict with what has already happened in the story.
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 15:57 CST Comment/Review: yur story is funni. very original. update soon.(yah it was getting kinda annoying with the evan thing) and wat the hell is a beta reader and everyone keeps telling me that they have there own beta reader and im like wtf is a beta reader?(man i ramble way too much in reviewd)
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Title: Caliko Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 16:10 CST Comment/Review: /snicker/ I torture my son (Anthony) and you think i'm COOL? waHAHAHAH... wanna be adopted? lol.. i have plenty of energy to torture 2... anywho, have patience.. this too shall pass as the saying goes. Just email me when you update (tho i'll be without internet for the next 10 days or so.. **sob**) ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 11, 2004 15:34 CST Comment/Review: cool
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 08, 2004 16:43 CST Comment/Review: thanks for the warning spector
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 08, 2004 16:42 CST Comment/Review: i meant that in a good way though.
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Reviewed By: Specter97 On: March 07, 2004 15:17 CST Comment/Review: ATTENTION ALL YOU PEOPLE READING THIS FAN FIC!!!! the reasons she hasn't updated recently is because for a couple reasons: 1)AOL sucks 2)her computer is being a peice of crap 3)won't let her to any major web sites sorry for inconvience folks, she will update as soon as she can until then any snide remarks about her not updating will be met with me kicking the crap out of you.
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Reviewed By: essie On: March 03, 2004 12:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved reading this fan fic it keeps me wanting more and more.I can't wait until there more chapter that can read. Please make more soon.
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Reviewed By: essie On: March 03, 2004 12:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved reading this fan fic it keeps me wanting more and more.I can't wait until there more chapter that can read. Please make more soon.
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 01, 2004 16:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey congratulations on another great chapter. but hurry up with the next one. i swear this fic is like a drug, i cant get enough of it!
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 07:59 CST Comment/Review: YAYYYY!!!! ^_^ Happy now that i've had my fix! You're breaking ground, you know, with this ficcy. Lots of people said that Kagome would turn hanyou, but NO one said that Shippo would too if he was adopted! **Happpy** You're doing great! Now... KEEP GOING! LOL ~Caliko
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