| "Takahashi High" Reviews/Comments [ 585 ] |
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 20:33 CST
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ok i didn't write enough before.So like i was sayong before i am so ur biggest fan.I love this story so much!When do Kagome and Inuyasha get on!I will keep on encouraging u if u write more.I really need to know how the guys will react to their outfits.Oh and isn't Kagome the tan one and Kikyo is the pale one?And finally make sure Kagome wears the corset(did i spell that right?)Chow 4 now. ^-^
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 20:28 CST
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I'm so ur biggest fan!
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Reviewed By: jprincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I really like it alot I think they should go to Barbados because I'm going there in May and I can't wait and my friend has a house out there anyway continue with the great work and I can't wait to see what happens in da club
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Reviewed By: fanficluvr On: February 20, 2004 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didn't review for sooo long........i was very busy and couldn't get online 4 like ever......i absolutely loooove the shopping spree and the outfits they got.*hmm, i wonder what the boys will think when they see the girls on fri?* r kouga and kikyu really gonna be in jail 4 the rest of the fic?maybe they could show up at the club and try to harass kagome or somthing?(whatever u do is fine with me) whatever it is, it's gonna be great!please update soon!hurry! i can't wait!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 20, 2004 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chappies, i didn't laugh as much as before but i still had a few good ones :)
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Title: Sad. Good. Interesting. Funny. Heh.
Reviewed By: ~*Ayumi*~ On: February 20, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob sob* What a sad chapters! First off, Kagome and the stabbing, then her and the 'Kouga attack'. 'Yash' stepped in at just the right time. [Damn Kikyo. . .] Then, there's the Sango-Kohaku/Dad Problem. Well, I'm glad he's decided to get some help, and I'm glad Miroku stepped in and did something about it. Yay! Oh, and the Rin/Sessy part. . .yeah, about that, that was. . .interestin. . .but, good, cuz it wasn't too graphic. You're story still good as ever, so Keep Writing! [:D] Yay! I have a headache. . .too much candy, i suppose. [Oh, who the hell am I trying to kid? I'll never have too much candy.]Anyway, just reviewing! Write Mor Soon! I'mm out to read more chapters! YAY! ¡PAZ! ~*AYUMI*~
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 15:54 CST
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I love your story!!! Can you please update soon... Or else as I say to everyone, Beware of my evil flying monkey minions!!!!!! You HAVE been warned... LOL ☼Vagabond☼
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 03:45 CST
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ahhh..... a floozy??? how funny... i don't really know what to say anymore i have no ideas hmmm.... maybe at the club you should have like three guys there hit on the girls that would be soooooooooo funny... yeah there hah. well ja
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Title: super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 21:40 CST
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooo....I LOVE the idea of the club! ~shivers!~ lol. I can just imagine Kagome in that corset. It would be SO pretty. Poor Inuyasha, he's gonna be drooling! lmao. I love the Rin/Sesshomaru citrus. It's awesome. Though, I do think that you could go into a little more detail. But, for Sess and Inu-above average, eh? (the bigger the better ^.~). There wasn't much Sango or Miroku, missed them. Owell, there's always next chapter, right? ^.^ Can't wait. ~Crimson~
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 19, 2004 20:27 CST
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'Who lives in a pineapple under the sea........!!!!--SpongeBob rules^_^!!! Great set of 'hot' chapters ^_~ update soon!! can't wait for Inu and Kag to really 'get it on'!!
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Title: Whoa.
Reviewed By: ~*AYUMI*~ On: February 19, 2004 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On the last review, I meant to write 10 insteada 9. Well, well, well. I just read the one where Kikyo stabs Kagome. It hurt me just reading about Kikyo stabbing her in the arm. The more I think about it, the more it hurts. Ow. Ow. Ow. Well, n·e·who, good job on that chapter. The Sango/Miroku thing was funny, but it's good she told someone about her papi and his problems. Well, I'm out. ¡PAZ! Write more soon! Ah-Buh-Bye! ((TªTª 4 N°W)) Murrh, I forgot to add how great your story is. ^__________^ I need candy and soda. Now. I'm slowly. . .running. . .low on. . .Sugar! Must have. . .sugar! Bueno, I'm ok now. Well, I mean it this time, Ah-Buh-Bye! ~*AYUMI*~
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Title: Heh.
Reviewed By: ~*Ayumi*~ On: February 19, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot my sign in name so oh well. . .we-e-e-el, I just read chapter 9, the one where Kikyo [die]sends [die] Kagome that [die] message on [die] her phone.[die]. ((I really don't like Kikyo. Sorry all you Kikyo-lovers.)) Anyways, I'm going to read the rest to see wut Kikyo's problem is. Grr. Oh, when you say 'pop' you mean soda, right? My cousin asked me if I wanted pop once, and I had no idea wut she was talking about, but she handed me a soda. If you haven't written the part about the senior trip yet, put my vote in for Barbados ((^_^)) Yay! Well, me tengo que ir, imma go read the rest and review. Ah-Buh-Bye!Hasta luego! Oh, Keep writing and good job. *winks, put thumbs up, and throws candy around* ~*AYUMI*~ Yay!
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 14:30 CST
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i say they should go to Bahamas.Great story keep writing!
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Reviewed By: NaotasLover On: February 19, 2004 09:38 CST
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hi, i love your story its one of my favorites. I vote that they go to Jamacia (sp?) w/e bye
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Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 01:30 CST
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would ya look at that, it signed me in!
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