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| "Takahashi High" Reviews/Comments [ 585 ] | | Pages (39): [ « ‹ 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 › » ] | Title: you know, super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: it is actually Crimson Tenshi here [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 01:29 CST
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Hey, my computer's screwed and won't let me sign in, but it is me. I love the fluff....mmmmm....citrusy fluffy goodness....~drool~. I love the back massage idea. Those feel soooooooo good. If you get them done by a professional masseuse(sp?) they hurt a bit, but the day after its like, wow! Did you know you can also get chest massages (for guys ne way)and i've been told they feel good, especially if it was Kagome giving Inuyasha the massage~wink~. I don't know anything about detox clinics, but you can find lots of stuff if you just research on the net. **Sorry I didn't review last chapter.** What you've done so far for the clinic is good though. Well, for Kagura, Kanna, and Naraku, you could put them in as not bad guys. Kikyo is gonna need a lawyer, right? So you could have Kagura or Kanna as her lawyer, with the other one an assistant, and Naraku could be the judge in court, if you're going to go into detail with that. If you aren't, Kagura could be a flight attendant on the plane they take to wherever they're going on the senior trip (btw, i vote Bahamas, its really beautiful there. I haven't gone, but a friend of mine did, and she brought me back pictures.) Kanna and Naraku could work at wherever they're staying while on the trip. There's so many possibilities to work them into the story. If you want more ideas, email me on hotmail.com. I have lots more. Anyway, I look forward to more fluff'n'citrus. Hope you update soon. Cya later. ~Crimson~
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...... I should stop speaking to you for putting a cliffhanger there. >:P///////// I like the back massage. Not enough people give back massages, and they're so nice too. Also, I don't think the back has enough nerves to distinguish certain... um... things... through fabric. Yeah. Like, if you take two pencils, stick them together and poke them into someone's back, then they won't be able to tell the difference from just one pencil. It's because the nerve endings are further spaced than on your hand. Interesting huh?@___@////////////// Aruba, Jamaica ooo I wanna take ya/ To Bermuda, Bahama come on pretty momma/ Key Largo, Montego baby why don't we go/ Ooo I wanna take you down to Kokomo/ We'll get there fast/ And then we'll take it slow/ That's where we wanna go/ Way down to Kokomo////////////////////////// Oh yeah! The Florida Keys is nice too. Ah, well it is time for me to go. Thanks a bunch for all the nummy Inu/Kag fluff! The Mir/San fluff was steamy, and the Rin/Sessh fluff was so sweet, I think I may need to go and brush my teath. lol. Byebye ^__^ Keep up the good work!
| Title: » ˇKawaii! «
Reviewed By: ~*Ayumi*~ On: February 18, 2004 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! That was romantic! Lol. . . Who knew he could be so sweet? Great Job! Well, I still got a lot more chapters to read. ((I'll be surprised if I don't go blind by then, but that's a good thing.))How did you write so many in only a couple days? :0 N·E·Who, I'm off to read the rest, so TªTª 4 N°W! ~*AYUMI*~ I'll leave some more reviews on later chapters. . . Oh, sorry if this posts twice. :)
| Title: » ˇKawaii! «
Reviewed By: ~*Ayumi*~ On: February 18, 2004 21:08 CST
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Wow! That was romantic! Lol. . . Who knew he could be so sweet? Great Job! Well, I still got a lot more chapters to read. ((I'll be surprised if I don't go blind by then, but that's a good thing.))How did you write so many in only a couple days? :0 N·E·Who, I'm off to read the rest, so TªTª 4 N°W! ~*AYUMI*~ I'll leave some more reviews on later chapters. . .
| Reviewed By: Shiku On: February 18, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this iz a really really gud fanfic i really like it i vote 1 for barbados lolz an keep up the good work, hope u can post up sum new chapters soon
| Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 15:05 CST
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They should go yo the bahamas.Keep writing it's a great story.
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 08:54 CST
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Yahaaaaaaahhh!!!!!! I'm bouncing around like I've got the basket, and I'm smiling like bozo the clown! ^___________________________________^ I love that studying bit!!! Thank you for using it!!!!!////////////// *sigh* well, I have nothing much else to say, except: MORE KAG/INU FLUFF!!! ^___^///////////// Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Lagra On: February 18, 2004 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic, and i vote for jamaica as well.
| Reviewed By: Relix On: February 18, 2004 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear.. if i have to die, i wanna die laughing.. This fics humor is so fucking good! Especially that tutoring thing! Oh, and the two lemons between Rin and Sessy/Fluffy were really good!
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 20:57 CST
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it's so lemony fresh... heheehhe... well yes like i said barbados and thank you very much for clarifying where barbados is... redherring is right AA is just meetings maybe you should create a clinic for him to attend... like a betty crawford type... maybe someome should be a druggy so they can go there that would be a first well that i've read from other stories ya know? miroku should propose to sango... i think i heard that you can get married at any age there... i think i'm not sure someone has to clarify that for me... well great going...
| Reviewed By: MeepOnMeep On: February 17, 2004 20:30 CST
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Omg!! They...they.. they....*blink* well u kno!! Omg its so good!!! ^.~ MORE!! peeeze
| Title: super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:08 CST
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Wonderful story! Are Naraku, Kagura, and Kanna gonna show up? If so, I hope you make into...not bad guys....^.^ Please continue. I look forward to updates.
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:01 CST
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*sigh* stupid cyber sitter taking out words. Ok, in the sentence before I said " I think I read somewhere that (g)ir(l)s get super hyper after their first time" ok then. bye!
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm, good job. Good job. Nice lemon, nice and steamy. I think I read somewhere that s get super hyper after their first time. I dunno... lol. Oh yeah! It was Brownies by Scorpiogal on fanfiction.net. Damn, she's funny.////////////// Good job with Sango's situation, but I still think that you should put Alvin in a clinic.(and I know you're the author, and I hope you don't get offended by my ramblings on this particular topic, but I like to argue ^___^) You said that he was a complete drunkard for four years, so if someone has alcahol in their system for that long, then it's like an addiction. The alcahol replaces neuron transmitions so the person can die if they try to detoxify themselves. I don't know all of what AA does, but I think it centers on getting people's lives back on track. Clinics help the person actually get all the alcahol out of their system and get clean. So, yeah. I did a project on it./////////////// Anyways, I think you're not doing enough Kag/Inu fluff. Because that's the best kind ^___^ Keep up the good work!/////////// PS- it might help to use a divider thing when you switch scenes. ^___^
| Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is for the most recent chapter but it won't let me go to the most one after i sign in. this is probably my first review for your story but i really enjoy reading it. im glad sess and rin finally decided they are ready. i love that pairing. they belong together i tell you! yay a happy ending to the chapter...alvin is going to aa. i hope you will update soon.
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