| "Takahashi High" Reviews/Comments [ 585 ] |
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Title: WHOA
Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 01:01 CST
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OMG... what a little bitch... ahhh... well i say bahamas...i go with that one... i can't wait till the next chapter i wonder why he broke up with her??? well i guess ima wait hehe chow...
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Bahamas or Jamaica... either one =D I love you fic! have I reviewed this yet? I'm not sure... But I've been reading it since you made it, I'll tell you that =D I love high school fics! Oh great... now Kikyo's in the story *bangs head on table* Just... great... *frowns* Kikyo's such a bitch.
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Reviewed By: Youkai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 00:33 CST
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Feh! the bahama's duh!!! GO BAHAMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MEEP!...Hi! Im Umeko! uhh...I think ur story is the best!!!! Keep it up! *loves the sess and rin stuff* R U Gonna give em a Lemon?! WooOOh! and when will Kagome get ahold of herself and get over being emmbaressed kissing and crap infront of other ppls!!? Aww...I lvoe the story!!! I NEED MORE! its like sugar, once you get some, you can't help but want more! Or you end up killing the person who used the rest of it...*cough* Not me...*shifty eyes* GREAT STORY!! ^,^ Umeko-chan out!~
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Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 20:46 CST
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hehe!! Great chapters!! At first, I was thinking they should go somewhere in the mountains or something like that, but then I read further, so yeah, there goes my idea *watches it fly away* Hehe! And don't worry about the help! I love helping a fellow author in need! ^_^ Maybe you could have the 6 ppls get lost in the junlge or sumthing while they're in... wherever they go. lol! I dunno, I have no idea what the geography is like in any of those places! hehe!
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Reviewed By: InusCorey On: February 15, 2004 20:29 CST
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Actually, my friend's dad used to have a 1968 jaguar roadster--cherry red--that car was really primo cherry!! just sweet!! and it was his baby too!! *sigh* wish I could have a car like that!! anyway, like your story too!! and I'll read on!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome to Jamaca man!!!!!!!!!!!! I say JAmaca or Barbados... I don't care just put down Jamaca for me... I love your fanfic!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think they should go to Jamica. It's fun there- they have those cool barrel drums, and the cool hats, and the scenery is awesome.//////// Anyway, I have an Idea that you could do with that. Since a trip like that is unusual- it would make more sense if they had to have classes there. Like- the school pays a couple of teachers to go down there with the kids and continue to teach them a few days out of the week. You could have them do reports on the culture, sports, or geographical features on the islands. Ya know, so the school board doesn't complain./////////////// Also- you could make Inuyasha's grades in one class be not so good, and he has to pull them up in time for the trip, so Kagome helps him study. You know the movie "Billy Madison" where he's studying for that final competition with the third grade teacher, and every time he gets a question right she looses a piece of clothing, but every time he gets one wrong she puts a piece of clothing on? Kagome should do something like that, but not until later when they're more comfortable with their relationship. That would be so fun for my little #ent@| brain. lol./////////////// Anyway, great job on the chapter! ^___^ Keep up the good work!////////// Random saying: When you're in over you're head, the best thing to do is to close your mouth. (wha-? *drowning noises*) lol.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 15, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a lot happened, but i don't blame you. It was still funny and good.
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Reviewed By: fanficluvr On: February 15, 2004 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story. love the sess/rin couple. maybe u can add kikyo into the story. she can be iny yasha's ex-girlfriend and she can try to mess up his and kagome's relationship somehow. anywayz, it's ur call however u want to rite the fanfic. but it's GREAT either way. update soon.(I MEAN IT!). p.s. can u try updating more than 1 page a day. (JUST TRY?) PLEEAASE?
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 11:31 CST
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lol. It's good sometimes to read pointless fluff. Whichis exactly what this story is ^___^ *drowns in more fluff* It's pililg up pretty high. Oh! They should all go swimming. Yep, they shoud go to a pool, or Inuyahsa and Sesshomaru's pool- because they should have one- and swim, or have a pool party. That would be fun to read ^___^ anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a great story so far and i cannot wait until you have updated. i really like it, i couldn't stop laughing. Krystal.
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Title: GOOD WRITING
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great writing, PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER!! hehe i am thinkin about writing one like this...i luv the sessy + rin storyline soo cute! e-mail me when you write other chapters i love reading this stuff !! antisocial_mint@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 14, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked that fight, you suprised me with the fact that Sangos dad was an alcoholic, this is pretty damn good, i know i've propably said that a few times by now but it just fits.
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Reviewed By: Lagra On: February 14, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly, the date with miroku and sango was good, and secondly: Nice fic.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fluff! *drowns in it* Jeeze, do you even have a plot? lol. I feel bad for Sango, though. You should have her dad get some help. Then she culd be more proud of her dad, and you could really soad the sango/Miroku fluff on thick when her dad finally gets put inot a clinic. But don't spend too much time on it. Depressing fluff is very good at it's job and it gets me all sad. *sigh* well, keep up the good work! ^___^
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