| "Jewel of the Chaotic Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: Liin On: February 10, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB!!!!! WRITE MORE SOON PLzZ!! MY FAV DEFINITELY!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that's all I can say, what a terrific story. With only a few grammatical mistakes, this really is a terrific premise. Although...you mentioned Inuyasha in the first few chapters as being alive (abeit older) but never mentioned him again. Where did he go? Anyways, a wonderful, brilliant, terrific story. Ack, running out of adjectives to describe it, I absolutely love it. I want more *looks greedy* please more! And was it just me, or was there a bit of sexual tension when Kur thought of Hiei??? *grins* But it did throw the story off a bit, since I hadn't really been expecting it, as there had been no mention of it anywhere earlier in the story. Perhaps it was jealousy over Hiei being so comfortable (with Kagome (and reminiscent of the Inuyasha days it seemed like)...did I interpret it wrong? Anyways, I want more!!!! Keep up the great work, and update soon *winks*
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: February 06, 2005 11:00 CST
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Please update real soon. I'm hoping it's Kurama/Kagome
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Reviewed By: killerkitty1106 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude that was freaking awesome i cant wait till the next chappie is soon!!!!!!!!! you need more fluff i cant tell if it is a hiei/kag or kurama/kag! but dont worry i like both or maybe een h/kur/kag that would nbe freaking awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 12:55 CST
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Liked it alot. Should have read it much sooner.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: February 04, 2005 21:47 CST
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interesting chapter. update more soon!
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Reviewed By: Shuuki On: February 04, 2005 12:32 CST
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Oh nice chapter! Very pretty and Kurama was very interesting, great job!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 21:28 CST
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Another great chapter, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Gosh! I love what you have written so far! Your fic is so captivating and I wish that you would finish it soon. Or at least update the next chapter really really soon! Keep this one going!
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Reviewed By: BookwormRose296 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 03:01 CST
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Wonder if everyone at school is blaming Suzumi for what happened to kagome's home. She did threaten to get even. Since Kagome is already most liked person at school and since she's not that whole populair, except maybe with few guys. This could really hurt her status, or what's left of it. Wonder how they will get Souta, Rin, and Koenma back. What will happen to Kagome? This is really great. Please update real soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story, glad to see you're updating. Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2005 21:48 CST
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last time you updated was so long ago I forgot about this story! still, I remembered realy quickly (which is a compliment, seeing as my memory sucks and normaly I'd have to reread the entire thing before I remembered what was going on!) I'm realy glad your continuing this story!
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Title: your fanfic jewel of the chaotic souls
Reviewed By: anime_fan141 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is a great fanfic so far(im onchapter 4) but so far it is really good i hope there are gonna be some good sections in the fanfic ,i just wanted to let you know that it isa greatfanfic so far and great job to you for making a great fanfic from anime_fan141
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Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:57 CST
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Sorry I took so long to read this chapter and review, but High School's a bitch and mine especially so. Anyways, I loved this chapter. You managed to write that whole "evil side of Kagome" thing really well. If it had been me writing that stuff, everybody would have been horrible confused and unsure of what was going on. You're such a talented writer! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ravensflight On: November 14, 2004 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! i loved how your story's characters act just like they do in the manga/anime. lots of people nowadays make their favorite character act really smart and the ones they hate stupid and awkward. i can't wait until your next chapter is up! Good luck!
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