| "Jewel of the Chaotic Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 15:30 CDT
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I'm hurt ^_^ kidding, not really, ummm, well... no other comments I guess...
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Reviewed By: Yokos_Rose(not logged on On: May 04, 2004 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHH another chapter! (jumps for joy) Yay!It was so short though, Oh well i'll just wait for the next one. I was wondering are Hiei and the others going to be in this? I don't really care about the others but I really hope that you add Hiei!! And are kagome and Kurama going to be paired up and if so when? Thanks ja ne Yuki-sama!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 21:21 CDT
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bah, i hate geometry....i happen to be doing that crap right now...well im supposed to be doing that crap right now but i never do my homework until the last second. ^_^ it was a painful reminder, good chapter, just bad reminder.^_^ im sure my gpa thanks you tho. keep writing and update soon please
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Reviewed By: Tsuki moon hime On: May 03, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEeeeeeeeeeee continue this story!!!! Onegai!!! Arigatou!!!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:26 CDT
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thankyou for the thankyou...(O_o) but i still must say this is very well written!^_^ By the way do you have any fanart for this fic? If so i'd like to see it! (i hope you don't have some on your account or ill be fealing very stupid!) Well i look forward to your next update, after all who can pass up a good ol helping of good written fic!
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Reviewed By: lil_newrisk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter....I cant wait for the next one.....please dont make me wait....lol Gracie
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 13:32 CDT
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hmmm did you update.... nope nope that was me....WHY WONT YOU UPDATE!!!!! sorry but I'm upset my comp broke so I'm in my computer classes checking the fics and updates.... no one in my fave updated!!!! well I'll go now or I'll be in trouble, JA dudes and dudettes!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, vivid, and fresh... that's supposed to be a big compliment, because we are talking about fan fiction here. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story, and please, please, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: lil_newrisk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love the fic...I constantly read and sometimes a story is so unpriginal that i can just skim through it and know whats going on...But not your...Every chapter had me enthralled and guessing to see what happens next....At first I didn't think I would enjoy the plot line but once you get into it...you're hooked...I can't wait for your next update. Gracie
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:13 CDT
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yay, i absolutly love this fic! please o please update soon? please?
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 06:36 CDT
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hey you haven't been updating!!! oh well just make sure it's soon okay? like in the next 2 min.......
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Reviewed By: lil miss crazy On: April 18, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no! no no no no! plz don't stop there! plz hurry and continue writing! it's so gooooood!!!!! NO! IT'T NOT GOOD! IT'S GREAT! plz hurry!
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Reviewed By: Mefdet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 06:15 CDT
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I hope ya update soon!!
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Title: Very Good.
Reviewed By: Naitome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My rating would be higher if possible on the scale. You are really good at this. your writing is very descriptive and percise. your grammer is spelled correctly. You give the definition of the Japanese words, and your story was very enjoyable to read, and your style of writing could be clearly seen without confusion of where a quote begins and ends. i have never read a story such as yours which makes the anticipation for you to update even more unbearable...Please update soon, your story is brilliant.
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 11:13 CDT
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yay I like this chapter can't wait for the next one please update soon
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