"InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: hockeygal On: May 28, 2004 14:37 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: cute story i love it a lot PLEASE WRITE MORE soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! g8 plot and i like it how Inuyahsa beated the SHIT OUT OF HOJO!!!!!!! i don't like hojo either good job i give extra points for that :-D
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Reviewed By: inutrasha On: May 28, 2004 08:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a very enjoyable story to read, and it was a very creative idea as well, leaving inu pinned until kagomes time. in fact this is the only story thats ever done that, Great work!!
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Title: awsome! Reviewed By: amura On: May 27, 2004 20:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is one of the best stories i have ever read i have 10 top favs and urs is num 2 so close to num 1 please keep going mabe as a sugjestion(SP) u should add in koga and he see's her and falls in love and inuyasha has to protect her and stuff lol it was really great
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Title: I JUST STARTED READING THIS AND YOUR DOING THIS TO ME!!!!! Reviewed By: cheychey23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 10:44 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I JUST STARTED READING THIS AND YOUR DOING THIS TO ME!!!!How dare you.
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Reviewed By: Votuse On: May 27, 2004 02:47 CDT Comment/Review: .....sorry but i find the people that hit people with cars and dont look back is funny.................... wait....im forgetting something i must say...um yeh thats all Your Tormentor, Votuse
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Title: calm down there buddy Reviewed By: chlo On: May 26, 2004 22:27 CDT Comment/Review: calm down there buddy, i'll review... i really enjoy the story so i keep reading. you need a hug and some candy.
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Title: Hey... Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 21:39 CDT Comment/Review: I am enjoying your fic, especially since you've started using your editing(ie. punctuation) and believe me...I mean no offence by that. The idea for your story has me going...it is good!!! So, keep going and don't worry about those who don't review. They are just...what's the word I am looking for?...Ignorant? Anyhoo....keep going!!! Can't wait to read more!
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Title: ? Reviewed By: some1 On: May 26, 2004 20:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is useless
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Reviewed By: shane (diablodude) On: May 26, 2004 16:52 CDT Comment/Review: this is such a good story. i have a idea but you may have used it in a chapter already but what do i know? my idea is a few days after kagome gets kidnapped by hojo(who sucks) inuyasha and kagome find a weird shaped bump in a trunk of a tree. as soon as kagome touches the bump a young kitsune ( shippo) falls to the ground and asks where he is and you get the picture...............................................damnit i forgot, i think you DID use that idea..........never mind.... just forget this review then.... like i said .......what do i know? plz R&R my stories, just look up my author name diablodude.
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: May 26, 2004 15:57 CDT Comment/Review: Heya! You are really scary when you get mad! I'm sorry I didn't review the last chapter! I am sorry! I didn't have the time... although I have been betaing for you so i really don't have to apoligize... oh well.. Kyla
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 26, 2004 10:32 CDT Comment/Review: not iternal it's enternal...and i have yet to find any other mistakes but this is one that sticks out right away.
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Title: inuyasha Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: May 06, 2004 16:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey i loved the story is inu goin to stay with kagome for the nite?......ummmmmm......well i waited a while for this fan fic to continue now im happy:) laterz ashley
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 01, 2004 15:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I agree that your spelling wasn't all that greet but I understand. I thought that your story was preety good, I enjoyed reading it. You should really finish this story.
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Title: hey hun Reviewed By: cassandra v On: May 01, 2004 12:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: plz write more i want to know the rest!!!!!!
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Title: inuyasha Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: May 01, 2004 11:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey well please update the story i want to know what happened to inu and kagome ........heehee i guess i will have to wait like everyone else......g2g laterz ashley u can email me at: ashleytolmasoff@hotmail.com
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