| "InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kyla (IYWriterGirl) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 20:53 CDT
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Well.. aren't people supposed to review? Lol. It's okay... I can't beta this cahpter right now anyway..
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I see nothing wrong with it at all. It's absolutely fabulous. Can't wait to read more. It's so totally awesome.Inu-Yasha is so sweet here! I love how you left some characters the same and changed some. You changed them to fit perfectly into your story! Please write more! I'm very hyper right now!
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl(not signed in) On: May 31, 2004 22:04 CDT
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i read ALL your reviews for Fiery Skies.. we are starting to sound like each others rabid fan girls (not in the sick way either) Kyla
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Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 01:37 CDT
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Glad you've made a comeback, and you seem to be happy again as well. Well, I guess that now that I've said that, I like the way your story is going, so keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: diablodude again On: May 30, 2004 23:30 CDT
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i have a qwestion. can you plz put my two characters in the story? my characters are diablodude (me) and he looks like : black armour like koga's,pointed ears like sesshomaru, red crescent moon on fore head, black hair like inuyasha's human form, brown eyes,muscular,and a blck tail. the second character is nukimsu, diablodudes mate and she looks like : black pointed dog ears with white tips, a golden star on her fore head, blue eyes, her armour is made from the shadow rat (like fire rate but black), filled out in certain places, goldy blond hair, uses shadow sword( a sword that can take any shape but she preferrs the kattanna look and it will cut through anything). both my characters are full demon but i just described their human look and they both work for naraku and can travel through shadows. diablodude has a sword as well called tantosaiga (sucky name but works for me) and with each battle its color changes from steel all the way to black, the strongest of all colors/shade. my characters are bth made up. diablodude.
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww!!! Inuyasha's nice in this one! thx. Everyone always makes Inuyasha a inconciderate jerk. Pleese update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: InuYasha_lover12 On: May 30, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy loved the story it was well written but mostly because it was about INUYASHA!!You are a good writer.
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: May 30, 2004 02:02 CDT
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you should read the last sentence of the chapter... i thought you'd have noticed it... Kyla
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Reviewed By: Chlo On: May 30, 2004 01:08 CDT
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of course it's pocky...what do you take me for? Still enjoying the story. i'm writing one too but it's about gundam wing my first love *Duo*
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Reviewed By: super_angel104 On: May 30, 2004 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty good to tell you the truth but needs work
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Reviewed By: brattycatty On: May 29, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved it could you write more soon
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Reviewed By: chmsweety (offline) On: May 29, 2004 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o ahhh!! more more more!! must have more! update soon
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan (off line) On: May 28, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. Its great! Please continue.
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Reviewed By: JJ/sakura On: May 28, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! please try to hurry with the next chapter or I might die with anticipation. Loves ya stories keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it and i do reveiw! don't hurt me please!!!!!! (sorry i had 2 do that and sorry what happended 2 ur family friend:( )
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