| "Behind Blue Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (Nsi) On: May 30, 2005 12:57 CDT
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Yay Heero! He yelled at Duo w00t! lol I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! -Till Then!
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Reviewed By: gaelan On: May 26, 2005 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was totally cool, and quite original really. i have not read anything about Heero being anorexic yet, hehehe. Cameron is quite an original character too, as for the way he talks, you could make him use one set of tense rules like eated, runned, writed and stuff like that. i have read that that was how kids form their language durung those stage. the part about Heero as a tenshi is something that i totally agree to. one thing though, Heero seems very delicate, and although you were able to make it work in the fic, could you just give him a little bit more backbone? please? i really love Heero and i want him to be stronger.
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Reviewed By: emeanor On: May 22, 2005 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Basically,the story progress and plot is good.Characters' feelings and actions are also conveyed,but it lacks a little more angst.Looking more into Heero's thoughts and feelings and adding some climax or actions will help to bring the fic further another stage too.Continue writing the fic,it is very well done!Most importantly,finish it up -readers need a closure too! (smile) $Emeanor~
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Reviewed By: aynia On: April 06, 2005 08:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! The meeting (or better confrontation?) seems to be inevitable now! Poor He-chan... *hugs He-chan plushie* but I'd say it's high time he talked to Duo - running and hiding are no options anymore. I'm looking forward to the next part! See ya! ~aynia ^^V
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Title: Kaneechewa!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: March 20, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O0o0o, great chapter, even though the juicy stuff isn't gonna happen 'til next chapter, so that means you must update with a new chapter very soon. As I've told you in my other review, I love this story! and I'm not sugar coating you, it's a great story!! It's sooo sad too... my poor hee-chan *pulls heero out and glomps him* oh, I also started to read your new story, great story so far and I hope you'll update that one too. I think your a great author and keep up the good work with your stories 'cause I'd hate to see your stories be discontinued. Anyways until your next chapter for this story Ja Ne! ~fujinakaheero~
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Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaa!! this is great!!!! update soon!!! *Himiko-chan*
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Reviewed By: laina On: March 19, 2005 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC. >__< I DEMAND YOU WRITE MORE...onegai? ;.;...
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: March 19, 2005 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much happening, but still, it was an update, w00t! I can't wait to see what happens during the dinner, hopefully Hee-chan will be alright! Update soon! - Till Then!
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Title: Behind Blue Eyes
Reviewed By: Whit On: February 22, 2005 08:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I really luv this fic, please write more! Can't wait to see what u come with next.
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Reviewed By: aynia On: February 09, 2005 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you liked my review! ^^ And thanks for the new chapter!! I wonder when 'tenshi' and Duo will meet... probably when we (and the other g-boys) don't expect it in the least, right!? ^^ I hope Heero won't make it too easy for Duo considering what he did to him denying his love and rejecting him. *hugs Cameron plushie* Cam's so cu--, erm, I mean _handsome_ (of course!). ^^ Seems he really misses his tenshi, even wears that sailor suit and calls for him - kawaii!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 22:00 CST
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love the last chance scenes between Duo and Heero. please keep it giong I'm lovin' it.
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: February 04, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww!! Now you gotta make another chappie ^.^ When will the Duo and Heero finally see each other? What will happen in the show-down? Please update soon, I really really really love this story, in all seriousness, I really do. Anyways I'll be waiting for your next up-date on any of your stories (hopefully this one) and when u do I'll have a nice email telling me, so I'll be waiting ^.^
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Title: Behind blue eyes
Reviewed By: Kathleen On: February 03, 2005 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
i have read many good story and i have to say that i just love your story i can not wait for the next the chapter i will be checking every day
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (don't feel like signin in) On: February 03, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated finally after what 6 months?! Will they finally meet each other at the hospital? I wonder what their reactions to finally seeing each other again! I'll be looking for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Mite Mite(too lazy to sign in) On: February 03, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I'm too lazy to sign in. Second, I luffed this chappy! So cute! In fact, I luff it so much, I'm almost willing to forgive you on the slow update.
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