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Reviewed By: Suzakurushi On: August 07, 2005 04:00 EDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review: you reeeeeeally need to work on your grammar. Try getting someone who can actually spell to be your beta (person who checks your story for mistakes)
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Title: chap 9 Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 03:19 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: you spelt a few of the characters names wrong, yuskie is actually Yusuke, Kuwabaras sister is Shizuru, Keyko is actually spelt Keiko. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 10:04 EDT Comment/Review: Okay then. Just please update ASAP!
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Title: The Guinea Pig Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 18:31 EDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Flame of the Miko Reviewed By: Flame of the Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 03:20 EDT Comment/Review: I enjoyed your story a great deal. While the spelling worried me there for a while, it wasn't anything too bad. You might want to consider getting yourself a beta. But that is besides the point. Your story is marvelous and I hope that you update soon. One of your other reviewers is right about the spelling of the names and such. If you need help with anything don't hesitate to ask. Helping out a fellow author is always a pleasure. ~Jenny
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Reviewed By: RoxyFoxyKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 20:53 EDT Comment/Review: oooooooooo i love it!!!!!!!!!!cant wait to c what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ayeka Penor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:34 EDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I don't believe I've read enough of your story yet to tell if the style is eight, ten or otherwise, but there are some grammar and spelling issues. In lookinf over the reviews it seems enough people have already offered corrections of the character's names so I won't repeat them. To help with grammar...consider finding a beta reader. They find the mistakes the author's eyes skip over and the result is much easier to read. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story! I love YuYu Hakusho and Inuyasha crossovers.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 01:49 EDT Comment/Review: Finally... a new chapter. :D But what a great chapter it was. I really hope this is gonna be a Hiei/Kag fic. Kazumas sister is Shizuru Kuwabara. Thats their last name. some ppl think its his first name, but his name is Kazuma Kuwabara. Also the Jegan is spelled Jagan. And Hiei uses a katana (its a type of sword) It sdoesnt have a name. Update Soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 21:12 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh thats sweet!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 19:49 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey I know that this is a little late but if your still out there will you PLLEEEAAASSSEEE update. I adore Hiei/Kagome pairings they are my absoulute fav. So please please please update if you are able. ^___^
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Title: The Guinea Pig Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 20:36 EST Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please.
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Title: The Guinea Pig Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 23:29 EST Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 09:19 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon!!! I love your story!!!!!!!
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Title: Update Soon Plz! Reviewed By: firedazzle16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:04 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: One of my few favs. I am very pickyness about the fics I read. But I love this one so much! Plz UPDATE soon!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 10:55 EDT Comment/Review: eeeee this is so good!! *lets out sound of pure excitement* XD this is so good!! ^_^ I love this story! Go Kagome/Hiei!
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