| "the Guinea Pig" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! but the chapters are to short?
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:00 EDT
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Great story keep at it. Why don't you have Shippo as her youngest brother and he was able to excape the evil docter and finds Kagome. E-mail at abigailme2001@yahoo.com to tell me what you think of the idea.
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Title: you s uck at spelling(iam one to talk)
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuskie=Yusuke, Jegan=Jagan, Kurma=Kurama
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
please write more!!!!!!! I love yur story! I am glad it is a Hiei/Kagome! Chao!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 04:30 EDT
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hey...you really suck at spelling...really. i dont mean to sound like a bitch, but you really do. you spelled most of the names wrong, but i think people already told you that. incase nobody has said anything i think the name of Hiei's sword is the Shadow Sword. i really like your fic, but the bad spelling kind of distracted me. once again, i appologise if i come off as mean. just tryin to offer helpful cryticism....cant spell that word...anywho update soon please ^_^ thanks in advance
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 19:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update! Please please please!^_^
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Reviewed By: shadow girl 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Need to update! Oh, Hiei's sword is called a katana. You know, a japanese sword. Boy, you need to finish. I really liked the part when you did Kagome's flashback i Hiei's head! I also liked the part...*continues rambling about how great the story is*... Oops, Did I talk too long? Oh well. Here's a cookie! *Hands over cookie, around 7"8!* Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!
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Title: Sword
Reviewed By: Thundercat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 20:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O I don\'t think he has a name for his sword. I\'ve never seen the show. But I do read the manga/comic and I have seen one of the movies. Every other fan fic writer just refers to his sword as a Katana. It\'s a long thin sword over 24 inches with a slightly curved blade. The only other sword he has used is the Sword of Darkness when he tried to turn Kieko into a demon. After Yusuke kicked his butt that sword was returned to the Spirit World.
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Reviewed By: angelkitty77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 02:03 EST
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it is so fun. i like really love your fights at the end
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 02:10 EST
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oops, made a mistake on my last review. The sword I refered to was the sword Hiei stole in the episode that he made his first apperance, as far as I know Hiei dosen't have a name for his sword. By focusing his spirit energy though he can power up his sword and use it like Kuwabara's spirit sword technique, the move is know as Sword of the Darkness Flame. I hope that this helps out.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 02:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Ok, spelling errors and the info you asked for here. Yuskie=Yusuke, Jegan=Jagan, Kurma=Kurama. And the name of Hiei's sword is the Shadow Sword.
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Title: Great update soon plez
Reviewed By: Tidlewave_the_fox_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 08:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how it started out and the way you desribed her ^^
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Title: spelling mistake
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 04:30 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh and btw you spelled kurama wrong its k-u-r-a-m-a not "kurma" and j-a-g-e-n not "jegen"
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Title: good
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 04:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good, write longer chapters! i don't really like the whole p.o.v. thing but thats just me...cool...lemon next chap?
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