| "the Guinea Pig" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic so update soon and I cant wait to see wut happen nexts to Kagome and Hiei in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 18:37 EDT
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kuwabaras sister is shizaru, its spelled 'Jagen eye' hieis sword it called a Kantana. Thank you for updateing AFTER LIKE A YEAR AND A HALF! ABOUT DAMN TIME! PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME WAIT THAT LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! ok, anys ways update soon! Ja Ne
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Title: Sister of this person
Reviewed By: lover girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Hey I got onto my sisters account to give you this review so I hope you like it!Kagome has a little to much power,but I like it!Put some more humor in the butkicking and I'll definately read more.The end comments were great(PUT SOMETHING LIKE THIS IN THE STORY!).Describe what Kagome LOOKS LIKE MORE!It was kind of hard to picture her.I think you should keep writing,you've got great skill...P.S don't tell my sister!(OR I"LL GET YOU!)
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Reviewed By: lover girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
veeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry instersting but UP-DATE NOW!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Kappa-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 17:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
Nice! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: lover girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is one super good story! only mabey make kagome's powers very strong and control over the elements or have her be able to tele-port or make portals. and by the way YOU HAVE HAD PLENTY OF TIME TO UP DATE SO DO ANOTHER CHAPTER ALREADY!
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Reviewed By: yashamoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 05:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: animelavuh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is really good!!! n by the way hiei's sword is called a katana aightz byez!!
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Title: fanfic lover
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 20:24 EDT
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I usually don't know Inu/Yu Yu stories but when I saw that is was a hiei/kagome and that kagome was a demon I decided to read it. Congratulations. It's usually hard to catch my interest in a story like this. Hopefully you will continue to the end. And by they way glair=glare. :)
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 12:34 EDT
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good fanfic... I agree with the person below me... The story's good... but the little spelling errors can be a little annoying... ^_^0
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Title: spelling errors
Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 15:25 EDT
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Ok, not to be too critical, but you made quite a few spelling errors with the names of the characters. I'm not really one to talk, but other than that, it's turning out to be a pretty good fanfic. Anyways here are the names that need to be corrected. Jegan = Jagan Kurma = Kurama Yoko = Youko Maikai = Makai Yuskie = Yusuke Kurbarwara = Kuwabara. Ya, I think that's about it.
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool. your officially on my favorites list! please update!! Ja ne ^_^!!
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thiis is a cool start but pleezz make the chappys longer!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! Please, please write more!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I love your story!
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