| "the Guinea Pig" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Title: Sword
Reviewed By: Thundercat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 20:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O I don\'t think he has a name for his sword. I\'ve never seen the show. But I do read the manga/comic and I have seen one of the movies. Every other fan fic writer just refers to his sword as a Katana. It\'s a long thin sword over 24 inches with a slightly curved blade. The only other sword he has used is the Sword of Darkness when he tried to turn Kieko into a demon. After Yusuke kicked his butt that sword was returned to the Spirit World.
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Reviewed By: angelkitty77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 02:03 EST
Comment/Review:
it is so fun. i like really love your fights at the end
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 02:10 EST
Comment/Review:
oops, made a mistake on my last review. The sword I refered to was the sword Hiei stole in the episode that he made his first apperance, as far as I know Hiei dosen't have a name for his sword. By focusing his spirit energy though he can power up his sword and use it like Kuwabara's spirit sword technique, the move is know as Sword of the Darkness Flame. I hope that this helps out.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 02:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Ok, spelling errors and the info you asked for here. Yuskie=Yusuke, Jegan=Jagan, Kurma=Kurama. And the name of Hiei's sword is the Shadow Sword.
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Title: Great update soon plez
Reviewed By: Tidlewave_the_fox_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 08:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how it started out and the way you desribed her ^^
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Title: spelling mistake
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 04:30 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh and btw you spelled kurama wrong its k-u-r-a-m-a not "kurma" and j-a-g-e-n not "jegen"
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Title: good
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 04:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good, write longer chapters! i don't really like the whole p.o.v. thing but thats just me...cool...lemon next chap?
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 08:54 EST
Comment/Review:
update or die!!!!!!!!
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Title: HEY!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO? Write more!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you spelled YUSUKE w-r-o-n-g!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 00:17 EST
Comment/Review:
its Jagan. and if you need a beta i can be it for you. my penname is Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe
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Title: please
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEASE!!! WRITE MORE!!!!
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Title: HEY!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 00:04 EST
Comment/Review:
Please update it soon!!!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I can't wait to know what happens next! I love Hiei/kagome fics!
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