| "the Guinea Pig" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Title: fanfic lover
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 20:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
I usually don't know Inu/Yu Yu stories but when I saw that is was a hiei/kagome and that kagome was a demon I decided to read it. Congratulations. It's usually hard to catch my interest in a story like this. Hopefully you will continue to the end. And by they way glair=glare. :)
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 12:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
good fanfic... I agree with the person below me... The story's good... but the little spelling errors can be a little annoying... ^_^0
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Title: spelling errors
Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 15:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, not to be too critical, but you made quite a few spelling errors with the names of the characters. I'm not really one to talk, but other than that, it's turning out to be a pretty good fanfic. Anyways here are the names that need to be corrected. Jegan = Jagan Kurma = Kurama Yoko = Youko Maikai = Makai Yuskie = Yusuke Kurbarwara = Kuwabara. Ya, I think that's about it.
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool. your officially on my favorites list! please update!! Ja ne ^_^!!
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thiis is a cool start but pleezz make the chappys longer!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! Please, please write more!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I love your story!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! but the chapters are to short?
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great story keep at it. Why don't you have Shippo as her youngest brother and he was able to excape the evil docter and finds Kagome. E-mail at abigailme2001@yahoo.com to tell me what you think of the idea.
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Title: you s uck at spelling(iam one to talk)
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuskie=Yusuke, Jegan=Jagan, Kurma=Kurama
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
please write more!!!!!!! I love yur story! I am glad it is a Hiei/Kagome! Chao!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 04:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey...you really suck at spelling...really. i dont mean to sound like a bitch, but you really do. you spelled most of the names wrong, but i think people already told you that. incase nobody has said anything i think the name of Hiei's sword is the Shadow Sword. i really like your fic, but the bad spelling kind of distracted me. once again, i appologise if i come off as mean. just tryin to offer helpful cryticism....cant spell that word...anywho update soon please ^_^ thanks in advance
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 19:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update! Please please please!^_^
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Reviewed By: shadow girl 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Need to update! Oh, Hiei's sword is called a katana. You know, a japanese sword. Boy, you need to finish. I really liked the part when you did Kagome's flashback i Hiei's head! I also liked the part...*continues rambling about how great the story is*... Oops, Did I talk too long? Oh well. Here's a cookie! *Hands over cookie, around 7"8!* Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!
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