| "the Guinea Pig" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Summerland [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 16:50 EST
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I love how this story is going, and the only thing I want to critique is Kurama* and Yusuke*
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 01:58 EST
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good story!pleez update it!i wanna see if Hiei really did fall for kagome.If he did then that makes the story al the better. pleez tell me this is also on antoher sight.if it is tell so i'll know. ok byz!
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Title: hn
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's good! plz update this as soon as possible! plz!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope u update soon!! please make the chapies longer too...i cant take the suspense wen u just end it in the middle of sumthing good..
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Kenmei *to lazy to log in* On: August 28, 2005 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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please please please update soon this is just a too awesome story to quit on. ^.^
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Reviewed By: dadada(to lazy to login) On: August 12, 2005 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it is soooo goooood i want to read more. every time i get on the internet i chek to see if u updated it or not.
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Title: The Guinea Pig
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 22:42 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Suzakurushi On: August 07, 2005 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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you reeeeeeally need to work on your grammar. Try getting someone who can actually spell to be your beta (person who checks your story for mistakes)
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Title: chap 9
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 03:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
you spelt a few of the characters names wrong, yuskie is actually Yusuke, Kuwabaras sister is Shizuru, Keyko is actually spelt Keiko. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 10:04 EDT
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Okay then. Just please update ASAP!
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Title: The Guinea Pig
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 18:31 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Flame of the Miko
Reviewed By: Flame of the Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 03:20 EDT
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I enjoyed your story a great deal. While the spelling worried me there for a while, it wasn't anything too bad. You might want to consider getting yourself a beta. But that is besides the point. Your story is marvelous and I hope that you update soon. One of your other reviewers is right about the spelling of the names and such. If you need help with anything don't hesitate to ask. Helping out a fellow author is always a pleasure. ~Jenny
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Reviewed By: RoxyFoxyKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 20:53 EDT
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oooooooooo i love it!!!!!!!!!!cant wait to c what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ayeka Penor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't believe I've read enough of your story yet to tell if the style is eight, ten or otherwise, but there are some grammar and spelling issues. In lookinf over the reviews it seems enough people have already offered corrections of the character's names so I won't repeat them. To help with grammar...consider finding a beta reader. They find the mistakes the author's eyes skip over and the result is much easier to read. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story! I love YuYu Hakusho and Inuyasha crossovers.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 01:49 EDT
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Finally... a new chapter. :D But what a great chapter it was. I really hope this is gonna be a Hiei/Kag fic. Kazumas sister is Shizuru Kuwabara. Thats their last name. some ppl think its his first name, but his name is Kazuma Kuwabara. Also the Jegan is spelled Jagan. And Hiei uses a katana (its a type of sword) It sdoesnt have a name. Update Soon. Ja ne
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