| "Fly on Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero(not signed in) On: August 26, 2005 16:01 CDT
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Hey, good stuff.. sorry I never got around to reading your latest chapter until now, my computer's been alittle more than mean to me. Anyways good stuff, gah but you left it as a cliff hanger! You're so mean.. please update then, I want to know who is calling Heero.. I mean this is the first time we've really been introduced to him in the story, I mean with what he does and such. Anyways update! Until next time then, Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Insano-Chick On: August 13, 2005 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly one of the best, and most enjoyable, GW fan fics that I have ever read. I really, truly love it. It's true that waiting for the next chapter is absolute torture, but I understand about life getting in the way and that it's occasionally hard to find motivation, even for things you enjoy. So I feel no bitterness towards you. Merely elation when I see that a new chapter has finally been put up. I started reading it awhile ago and am determined to stay with it to the end. So if you fear there are no other readers, know there is at least one. Thank you for writing what you have. It's nice for those of lacking proper writing talent to be able to appreciate the efforts of others. I hope that life treats you well and you find the motivation you need. Till then, I'll be waiting paitiently.
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Reviewed By: picaresque [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is a great story. Your a great writer. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what'll happen next.
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Title: psychotic_penguins
Reviewed By: scarletphantom_alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please Update Soon~! Oh the suspense~! This is a great story, good luck in the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: nhaia On: July 26, 2005 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, por fin, excuse me, in english... finally!!!.. I was waiting for the next part of your fic for... three months?? yes approximatelly..Well What about the Quatre's mistery and more important Duo's mistery??? The teddy bear: Sandy??? Why is a security blanket?...well I hope you have more time for writting... Thanks for your great fic...
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Reviewed By: I Miss the Rain On: July 20, 2005 00:47 CDT
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OMG!! So short! But I'm so glad that you updated! And finally, the illusive Heero appears! Squee! I'm so fraeking wired now. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE try to not take so long to update!! O can understand, I mean... if you just aren't up to it... But... I really hope you'll update!
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Reviewed By: JASR On: July 18, 2005 20:26 CDT
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You've got a great story going. Even though it's hard to wait until the next update, some fics are well worth the wait. I bring "The Forgotten Boys" to your attention. It is good to read some fics that are long and in depth and allows the reader to seem as though you're a participant in the story. Good writing and many happy chapters to go.
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Reviewed By: SPF15 On: July 18, 2005 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm still reading and I'm looking forward to more!
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Title: duh!
Reviewed By: Dentelle_noir(not sighned in) On: July 18, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Of course we're still reading this! It's a great fic, I was so glad to see you hadn't abandoned it. I really love the teaser of finally putting Heero in. The only prob I have in the story is one little no-way-in-hell point~ Trowa just meets someone and all of a sudden he's over his silence? Perhaps if Quatre reminded him of someone, or if he knew him better, or some reason like that, but I have difficulty believing it was just like *snaps fingers*. But I desperately love the story! Please keep going
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero! He really does exist. Poor Quatre, he's totally losing it & Trowa's so overcome with guilt that Quatre doesn't have his support.
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Reviewed By: amy hirosaki, too lazy to actually log in On: July 16, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=) I'm still reading your fic, and gods I love it!!! @_@
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, you updated at long last!! I've been waiting and waiting for this chapter, I'm so glad you finally wrote it! And no worries, I totally understand the whole stressful thing, I sympathise. I'm ever so slightly confused though; did Duo hurt Quatre? Or was Quatre just caught in the 'crossfire' between Duo and the keyboard? Or is he not hurt at all? Anyway, please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: July 16, 2005 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love this story! I would never abandon hope for an update. I'm really glad we got another chapter, even if the whole Heero thing is still a mystery. Please keep writing - I'll be waiting for the next update. =)
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Reviewed By: Akennea On: July 16, 2005 01:11 CDT
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Don't worry too much about updating right away, I think we all understand about how stress can effect writing, so just relax and let it come when it does. I love this fic by the way, you have a good writing style.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: July 15, 2005 23:43 CDT
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Man, you took like forever to update. I was starting to think you had given up on it. I'm so glad that you updated and i hope you can get the next one up soon.
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