| "Fly on Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: CrimsonLolita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O!! OMG!! I seriously think I love you. o.o This fic is so great, you have no idea how much I love it. Part of me is sad that I just now discovered it, but another part of me is happy because I got to read so much in one sitting. You've got me hooked, no doubt about it. I hope you can get another chapter out soon, but no rush, I've got all the time in the world. ^^ P.S. Will you marry me? xD
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Reviewed By: KyouElidd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 12:24 CDT
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omg, i love this story!!! when are the new chapters coming out? it's really great. keep writing
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Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You're awful! *hurls tomatoes at you* how could you just leave us, the readers, hanging once again for so very long? I even managed to lose the link for several months and am sad that there is nothing new here. But in all Seriousness, this story thus far is amaizing. I am greatly enjoying it, and given the sheer number of good reviews I would say that many other people have enjoyed your nice word choices, excelent descriptions, and over all enjoyable to read story. I do hope that you will continue this story, it would be depressing to get us all 17 chapters in and then never touch the fic again. It could provoke a riot.
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Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! Might I just say O_O this story is amaizing! I love your sentance structure, and your background knowledge is beautiful. The grammar is a little odd in some spots, but I could be wrong *-^ I must say, I am a little sad that I've made it to the most recently updated chapter, I've come to know from your notes that you don't get around to updating very much ^-^; so I'll just have to be patient as I wait for the next chapter of this amaizing story. It feels very profesional, I must say before I end this review... I hardly ever find such amaizing and profesional stories in fanfics! Thank you for writing such a story ^-^
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 02:29 CDT
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Heero brought Duo flowers! So he does return Duo's feeling, at least in part?
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Reviewed By: AutomatedRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 01:12 CDT
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yays you updated! w00t! as always you have done a great job (rusty...ha!). Keep it up, and good luck in school this semester! :) Automated Rose
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 13:36 CDT
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Thank you soooo much for continuing! This story is so great, It's great that you haven't forgotten about it. Keep up the amazing work but do try to update a bit quicker. PS: I like Hee chan so far, he's a bit...stiff but that must just be Heero not the fact that he's APD, ne? Nyways this is NICE!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 11:46 CDT
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Omg, it took you forever to update. I'm glad that have not forgotten about this story ^_^ *gives VNyte giant pocky*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 11:15 CDT
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*hugs VNyte* thank you for not forgetting about us. I really missed this story and man has it really been that long?! *whistles* I'm glad life is going well for you and congratulations with school. I completely understand the time lapse, it's expected after all. *hugs you* They finally meet Heero and as I hoped (did? I need to check my last review) he's not what Wuffers made him out to be, maybe Quat and Wuffers can sneak into the nurse's station after hours and get Duo's gift. Take care and update when you can ...haha, I'll still be here for ya ^_^
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 23:00 CDT
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I don't mind slow updates as long as the story isn't forgotten! I'm so glad/relieved that you're still writing this! It's so wonderful! Update again soon!?
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 23:33 CDT
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omg if u dont continue this I'm gonna spaz out and then do something really drastic! At first I thought this was gonna be pretty bad becuase honestly you got a lot of the disorders wrong (sry im a bit of a psych geek and I have APD, sociopath, myself so I'm sort of in the know) but this fic is absolutely wonderful and I can not wait for more, especially duo and I hope to meet my fellow sociopath Heero soon. I understand you haven't written this fic in a while but I really am going to light some fires or something if you don't so I do hope you continue ^_~ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: RebelNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 19:32 CST
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please please update this. i know you propable don't want to. but please. think on it.
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Reviewed By: AutomatedRose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 02:07 CST
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hey, I was just going thru the few fav. stories I have on this site and just thought I would say that this is one of then. And I can fully understand not being able to update as much as you wish you could. But I would ever so love it if you could update, when you can. :) You have a wonderful story so far, and I honestly can't wait until you have the finished product out. :) Please keep up the good work. AutomatedRose
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Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 13:19 CDT
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*Begs* Please, please, PLEASE update this fic! I know you are probably really busy, have lots of stuff going on in your life etc, but I would really love it if you updated this fic. I think it'd just be such a shame if this fic was abandoned. I'm not saying you've abandoned it or anything, I'm just begging *gets on knees (see? That's how much I love this fic)* you to update it. I really want to know what happens, and you're such a good fanfic writer. Your nagging fan, ~Sandy~
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Title: More please
Reviewed By: smilie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please i love your story
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