| "The Centre" Reviews/Comments [ 167 ] |
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Title: Made it to chaper 27
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 11:20 CST
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Very interesting how your twisting as many original characters into your storyline. They aren't too out of character either. (artistic licence, LOL) -- Jakotsu was completely male. And he didn't want 'sex' so much as he got off in the slow killing of 'cute' guys. He loved the blood. He also really liked InuYasha's human form too...he just liked the Hanyou form better. He wanted to "...see you cry and hear you beg me to end your life." *gag* Jakostu was one sick puppy. --- Well, onto the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 05:09 CST
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I really enjoyed the scene between Sango and her Dad. However, are all her eggs destroyed or just her ability to bear young from her own body? I also liked the scene between Kagome and Inuyasha. I have been with my partner since 1980 and that is one "mystery" I do my utmost to preserve. I don't think Jaken would criticise Sess, unless he's become more of his own person while Sess was imprisoned. I think, as Jaken sees it, whatever Sess wants to do becomes a suitable activity. Very entertaining chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 15, 2005 18:17 CST
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Fantastic chapter. I really liked how you played out that one. Inu and Kag are getting on well, Sango and Miroku are doing well and Sesshomari and Rin are seemingly having fun. I can't help but wonder what it is that Kaede has found. I look forwards to finding out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Just found this...pretty interesting.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 15, 2005 14:33 CST
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Most AU's are very disappoining but your first chapter has caught my curiosity. I will continue and review more later, but your writing style seems very good. --- I try to ignore most typos because I can be qutie the spelling nazi at times (not my best feature! LOL) but the name for chapter one is hard resist. "Rouge" means 'blush or a reddish color' - I believe you want the word "Rogue" which means 'maverick or wild or out of control...etc' --- Well, onward!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Heath1 On: February 15, 2005 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo Dude, I liked it and I think that Kagome in the middle worked well. Kaede is awesome in that role and I think it was a good idea. Rock on sista!
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 01:18 CST
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I've been following this fic for awhile and it's great! I love the plot and the characters are nicely portrayed.... And don't worry..the lemon was fine...tho I am curious...how does masturbating make you less tight? (Ah..I am innocent after all....)
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Title: The Center
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:49 CST
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The chapter was really short and sweet but that was exactly what I wanted=) Good job and THANK YOU for the lemon^^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 30, 2005 18:51 CST
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Excellent chapter. Glad to see the two of them finally sorted it out, now all the couples are figuring out their lives. All they have to do now is kill Naraku... Good luck with the presentation! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: AbbessAuma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG girl, I am seeing some similarities to a blonde I know in Kagome in this chapter. HAHA! Good update! ~H
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: January 30, 2005 13:42 CST
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w00t! *squeals* LEMON! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Kag's grandpa made me laugh, that was just hilarious. -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: FaileDi7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo girl! That was peachy for a first time :) Who knew Inuyasha would be so knowledgable about human women, eh? "Downward cervix"...now THERE's pillow talk! Can't tell a bio major wrote this...lol Still, I wish guys did exist like him...how sweet!!
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Reviewed By: fire878 On: January 29, 2005 13:44 CST
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I LOVE this story!! its great.. i love how the whole story is structured and doesnt get boring!! U HAVE TO UPDATE i have gotta know what happens between inuyasha and kagome!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Yo Dude
Reviewed By: AbbessAuma On: January 22, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG dude the newest chapter and the teaser, I almost died with laughter.. It is getting good my dear and keep it coming along. Rock on sista! ~H
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Title: The Centre
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 19:42 CST
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That was awesome! The net chapter had better be a lemon you're writing right now, buddy! You got my hopes up now:D btw, ur evil for leaving us at a cliffhanger again >.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 16, 2005 18:54 CST
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Excellent chapter. So, Kouga finally marked Ayame and Kagome is going to mate with Inuyasha. Apart from the fact they have an insane demon trying to kill all of them life is looking good. On a side note do you know how many seasons of Inuyasha there are? I'm part way through 3 and I was wondering how much more is left... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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