| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 12:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!! Merry Christmas and thank you for writing this story!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn, he destroyed the transmitter! And I bet Bulma's mysterious illness makes a reappearance soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Title: A Saiyan For All Seasons
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just don't want them back together. yamcha and bulma.and why did vegeta break the ear piece.all he had to do was take it out of his eye.what a asre hole he is...anyway great chapter and i can't wait for more..update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: December 12, 2004 23:59 EST
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Yamcha is right...Stop denial and face the truth..you are fall in love with Vegeta, Though it might be hard to belive. Komachai Ayako:I want to see what happens when Yamcha and Bulma go to that bar. Xiahou Fumi: All right! Bulma made it up alive! and she made it almost all the way without help. Yin Yi`Jing: There gos the communicator...No more interesting conversations with Bulma and Vegeta. And I like read the conversations with Bulma and Vegeta from the communicator*cries*. So Bulma is now pregnant...Yay! Trunks is about to born. I really want to see what happens when Vegeta comes back. Komachi Ayako: A reunion...But if it is bitter or sweet I just don't know. Yin Yi`Jing: Bittersweet is likely.
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: December 12, 2004 22:53 EST
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shes pregnant huh? nice chapter
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: December 12, 2004 19:33 EST
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awesome... someone's pregnant... but when will veggie be back ahhh
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: December 12, 2004 18:55 EST
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Hopefully Goku will be able to tell Bulma to start giving Vegeta more credit that she's giving him already, especially if Vegeta's scent is still on her clothing.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:48 EST
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I appreciate that you make Yamcha a sympathetic friend withoout compromising his "just a guy" qualities and when you make Bulma vulnerable without making her spineless. Everything flowed very well--! I know this was a hard chapter--just because of all the dialogue and repartee and I know you're an idea/angst/description writer, but I think you really pulled it off--I laughed out loud a couple times ("Why is there always carrots?" !!) It was all an easy-to-read set-up, and the sickness and pregnancy stuff was nicely done. Sometimes I find myself rooting for Yamcha in your new get-togethers but I know how sexy you write Vegeta--geez, just that little bit on the communicator was enough to make me a little giddy myself :-) *thumbs up!* deb
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 15:26 EST
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You will write more! See, I read this first on Adultfan and I didn't know how to write reviews on that, so yeah. I'm kinda incompetent. Anyway, I really enjoy this fic a lot and hope that you are able to update as soon as life allows. Thanks much ^_^
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: November 27, 2004 21:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! pls update soon
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Reviewed By: sarahxx On: November 27, 2004 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope u will update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kiera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 03:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Heart-wrenching... I nearly cried. I love it. =`) Poor Bulma...
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy On: November 21, 2004 18:24 EST
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Wow this story is absolutely brilliant you really have depicted Vejiita as the enigma he is i'm stumped about how he really feels.The way you show his dark humour had me cracking up with laughter especially when he said: '"Foolish woman. This wouldn't have anything to do with the "friends" shit again, would it? If we can't fuck then what's the point of talking? It's all just a prelude to foreplay anyway."' The way he adamently denies their friendship is just hilarious i mean he already admitted to possibly liking her albeit grudgingly. Ahh i can't wait for the next update. That goes for Feeding Genius too. Venus
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:Sigh: So now he's gone. I wonder what Bulma's going to get up to. Sounds like a whole now bunch of trouble. I can't wait for the next chapter and the climbing angst.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: November 10, 2004 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm proud of Bulma. That wasn't easy for her, but she stuck to her guns. Vegeta is such a bastard... but that's why we all are so fascinated by him, isn't it? Excellent, riveting chapter as always.
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