| "A Light amongst the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 06:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa *Bow's* onigai, onigai, ONIGGAAAII finish the story I need to know what happens, please continue don't let your fan's suffer... Lady Kagome may Kami blees you and all the ones you hold dear
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa Talilea Sama, *Bows* It is an honnor to read such a great story I love it, I shall continue the other chapters as soon as I am able, I hope and am shore they are just as good, Fare well... Lady Kagome may kami bless you and all the ones you love...
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus nli On: September 15, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
beautiful story so far, i cant wait to read more.. :) you are gifted!! ~kat
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great you made the whait worth it that was a great chapter keep up the great work
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Title: A Light amongst the Darkness
Reviewed By: sailormoon1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say you story is so compleying and so moving that i just couldn't not stop reading it. Please don't let others negitaive comments get the better of you. You are a great writer an one of the few writers who can capture a reader an hold onto them and lead them through the story, and make them believe the are in the story fighting along side the character fighting with them. So please continue to write you beautiful stories for people to enjoy them. An you drawing were great...alot better than i can do.(I can only draw stick figures!)
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Reviewed By: Blademaster On: November 09, 2004 16:05 CST
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Welcome back Tal, I was hoping you didn't just forget about the story or give up. I'm glad you don't care about those flame sending fucks anymore. Keep up the good work. Oh,and what does huggles mean anyway?
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 00:34 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, so i've only read up until chapter 5 and i think your work is AWSOME!!! i know i have yet get into eveything but the words and the rythem that you have created surrounding the characters and their motivations and definitions is flawless. i love the idea that someone has finally picked up on the fact that Sesshy has to be the 'ice prince' for a reason. i can't wait to finish reading this and i will let you know what i think of it at the end. :-) great job so far!!!
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Reviewed By: JMarie-Serena On: October 10, 2004 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was talking to Tal and she asked me to tell her readers that she should have the internet back in a montha dn there will be a two chapter update then. She's sorry but that's all she could do!
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
why havent you updated yet you have a realy great story going hear i hope thet you update soon
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Reviewed By: phat dan On: August 23, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur a bitch u know that how could make inuyasha say kikyos name when he was kissing kagome thats pure evil you baka they better make up or this story will offially suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...This is one of the few fanfics I have truly enjoyed. I sat down today and read the whole thing for the first time. I hope you update soon. I'm obessed with your story and I might have to start stalking you if you don't update soon. Just kidding. But seriously I'm in love with this story! I read your AN and I'm sorry you are having a hard time with one jerk reviewer. Don't pay any attention to him/her. Follow your heart, if you love what you are doing then that's all that should matter.
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Title: Nice work
Reviewed By: Tenshin On: July 26, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
While I just started reading this fic I am already quite impressed with your work. The plot is unique and very interesting. The only error I have found so far, besides minor spelling mistakes, was a slight lack in pronoun usage. For instance the word kekkai was used frequently. I am always happy to learn a new word, I'm assuming Japanese, but try to use a synonym to replace it on occasion. Keep up the good work and include more Japanese!
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Reviewed By: JMarie-Serena On: July 18, 2004 23:46 CDT
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Ok Tal, i'm at home for a week it seems due to my Gall bladder surgery... so now you HAVE to update cause i'm going out of my mind and can't get comfortable enough to sit and read. it is imperitive you update soon! PLEASESPLEASES!!! and on a side note so you can update our fellow workers, i'm doing OK but still am in quite some pain!
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Reviewed By: Blademaster On: July 14, 2004 09:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Exellent chapter please update soon , sorry cant think of anything else to write
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Reviewed By: JMarie-Serena On: July 13, 2004 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter.. i need more now you know.... anyways e-mail me a copy of that pic sometime too will ya? Hope your mom is doing better! see ya around!
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