| "Come As You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:49 CDT
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good, if there's one thing every story needs it's dark smut. Can't wait for your next update
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Reviewed By: Amanda! On: July 03, 2004 10:14 CDT
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Ran and Yohji had better be all in love again in, like,
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Title: evilkat
Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:47 CDT
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Oh, sweet merciful angst, I do love you so...and I love this story. Shu is the perfect bad guy and always manages to show up when you least expect him, like the Spanish Inquisition :) But seriously, you do now how to tell a story. Every sentence has me enthralled. Please, for the love of god and your own body, update soon.
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Reviewed By: ilovedaveyhavok On: June 29, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Sibyl On: June 15, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just read your two works and I LOVE it! I must admit though, I almost didn't make it past Ran's last prostitution night. It was too graphic for me and it had me cringing. But I forced myself to read it and I found it rewarding. I applaud your style. No matter how we want our bishies to remain unsullied and flawless, abuses like these do tend to leave their mark; I admire your courage to not hide any of these imperfections. I mean, there's angst, and then there's anime gher. I would like to see Aya and Yohji live happily ever after (after all they've been through, you'd at least think they deserve it), but with all these foreshadowing of Schuldig and some old geezer AND Gluhen I doubt it would happen, if at all (cross my fingers). (sigh) Oh well. By the way, is that old guy a ex-customer or from Rosenkreuz? Don't mind me, I'm just babbling. Keep up the good work and make sure to keep your muses happy.
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Reviewed By: Dephinium On: May 30, 2004 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved "I Hate Him" and I know will love "Come As You Are" just the same. Thanks for returning back to writing and gracing us with your great fics, that always cure my Weiss fanfic woes. I am so excited to discover what you have in store for the couples and what stimulating new sex scene you will have them in. I love Ken and Omi's new weekend-sex rule, cause it makes the wait even better, but I don't think Ken would beleive me. And I am really enjoying how romantic Yohji and Aya's relationship is getting. It great to have you back.
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Reviewed By: CharlizeDoe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 13:32 CDT
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Uhuuh, see I here big Aya torture coming, again? *shudders*. Working towards Glühen, so nooo happy ending here? Keep up your nice writing....
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Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 22:33 CDT
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So normal people reject the idea of getting a tattoo identical to Yohji's . . .wish someone had told me that /before/ I got one, oh well, I consider it a bit of homage. Loved this chapter, eagerly awaiting another (and thanks for the mention in the end notes, even if it was just for getting my little praise in first). So wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Auribiel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like 'I hate him' and this continuation is just great! *jumps happily up and down* Poor Nagi! And Schuldig and Crawford are sooo bad! :) I'm waiting eager for your next part of this story! *nods* But... please... *whines a bit* ...if you use German words, let someone check them out and don't take them off of a dictionary (If you want, you can ask me for it, German is my native language and some of the words you have used are incorrect and make my toenails curl up).
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if I've reviewed your fics before but if I haven't I should smack myself upside the head for not doing so. I am overjoyed that you are continuing the "I Hate Him" storyline. Seeing a new chapter to any of your stories always makes my day. You are a very talented writer and I cannot possibly say enough about how much I adore your stories. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 13:47 CDT
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I especially liked the way you described Schu and farfarello, all creepy and nutty
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 23:53 CDT
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I'll beta for you! ^^ I'm on a major writing break due to block, but I'll be happy to beta for you. Here's my contact information: morningstar(at)sweet-chaos.net. ^_^ Nice fic, again!
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 23:51 CDT
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I'll beta for you! ^^ My user alias is NekoHope on MM.org, and I'm on a major writing break due to block, but I'll be happy to beta for you. Here's my contact information: morningstar(at)sweet-chaos.net. ^_^ Nice fic, again!
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Reviewed By: Amanda is already in use :( On: April 20, 2004 19:16 CDT
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Do you know that I love you (..and your stories)?
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Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 14:55 CDT
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It continues! I have been given a consolation for college finals by the great gods of lemon fanfics and you. Yay! I'm so happy! I adored "I Hate Him" and was so very sad at its end..and now...Aya with long hair and it's not stupid Gluhen! Good work, please say there's more..please?
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