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Reviewed By: Sirsinna On: April 25, 2005 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this, and I usually do not care for fanfiction. Please update it again, I hope you feel it is really worth finishing. I think it is.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well all promises were certainly fulfilled, and then some! Hurray for the rescue, I hope Aya is able to recover. Given the careful work you've done to set this up for Gluhen, I am confident he will, but the damage to all will be difficult to overcome. I particularly loved the return of Abyssinian, and Nagi's quiet help.
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 18:59 CST
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Okay, so Farf is in Brad's head ala "Being John Malcovitch?" Hi-larious. I love the fact that just when they thought they had Aya down for the count, he turns all Abyssinian on them. I don't think I need to reiterate how much I love this story...great job. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: February 22, 2005 02:14 CST
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whaaa poor assassins!! and muhahahha bradley fainted muahhaha
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:44 CST
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Excellant chapter. Can't wait to see how this Crawford/Farf pairing develops @-@. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lady Gackt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 22:37 CST
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Dammit, I'm finally gonna get off my ass and review! I had really enjoyed Farfarello in this chapter. It really was a sad scene when he died, I had to shed a few tears... but the line, "Crawford? I didn't know you were God," almost made me snort soda out of my nose! LMAO! XD It also made me feel happier, knowing Farf isn't entirely gone and alone. Schuldig, on the other hand, man, he's a total bastard, hahaha. I don't feel sorry for him at all. Which is good. The way I see his sudden obsession with Youji is that he isn't really wanting Youji exactly, I don't think. But more like wanting what Youji could give him, like what Youji had given Aya. Which really must be what he's so jealous about, yeah? Their relationship... Well, too bad, no happily ever after for this sadistic villain! =3 (I hope) And Aya in tiny shorts and fishnets has me nosebleeding. Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:11 CST
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Holy... what a developement! Farfie's dead... and inside Crawford's head? I'm baffled... Is Aya still alive? Please say yes! And that Yohji stays alive as well... update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 07:11 CST
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That is a great development. I am very excited for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 06:53 CST
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I'm glad Nagi is making a stand. Even as a die-hard KenxOmi fan, I feel I have been groomed enough by this fic that if it ends up NagixOmi I'll allow it this once. I don't know if that's where this is going, but if it is you are doing a brilliant job of it, making Ken and Omi look incompatible without really making us hate either one. Most people would just make Ken have an affair out of nowhere or something like that, without any preperation, just an abrupt break-up that makes everone hate Ken.
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 06:25 CST
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Sorry, things have been so hectic I haven't had time to breath, but now I have a free afternoon and yours is the first fic I decided to get caught up on. It's still great!
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Title: Halcyon
Reviewed By: Halcyon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! They finally rescued Aya and what a battle it was. Your discriptions in this chapter were very vivid and harsh, capturing the desparate mood of this climactic scene. I am also amazed at how your working this into the Gluhen series, if that is what your doing. I think I have an idea at the ending. But I will wait patiently with baited breath for whatever you have in store. All I ask is that the next part has a lot of lovin. ^_^
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Reviewed By: tougakiryuukun On: January 27, 2005 07:33 CST
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Reviewed By: tougakiryuukun On: January 27, 2005 07:30 CST
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 21:43 CST
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POOOOOOORRRRR AYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awww I want to cry! You MUST have a happy ending! Please?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes, poor Aya! Even knowing that this is leading up to Gluhen, it is difficult to see how he can survive. Even with the transfusion, with so many holes and cuts, it only seems a very temporary measure. I note, at least, neither Schuldig nor Farfello have yet carried out their earlier express threats. The characters otherwise are indeed moving into Gluhen territory, and showing how much they need Aya (and he needs them). Please come back soon with more!
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