| "Come As You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Oof, you really are evil to leave the chapter at an ending like that. Keep up the great work! ^.~ Can't read this stuff at work anymore (new job) but still anxiously waiting for more when I get home. Glad you enjoyed Japan, I'm so jealous!
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Title: I Can't Be Cool
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan(orY/A) On: September 18, 2004 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading all of the chapters posted here for this fic. I must say I am all consumed in this one...Guess I'm a sucker for the angst. I really like how this story is going...Can't wait for the moment when Yohji tells Aya what happened that night(with Schu) and for Aya to find out that Schu was in the bathroom with at school...That is going to happen right? I hope those two really take it out of Schu's ass(Can I say that here? Anyway update soon...I need my angst fix or I get all cranky...Oh yeah I was reading some of your responses at the end of this chapter to other reviewers...Wow you went to Japan?!?! AND saw some Yohji look alikes?!?!?! How lucky is it to be you?
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Reviewed By: jessara40k [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I found this fic, and I love it just as much as I Hate Him. Poor poor Aya. I liked the way he angsted in chapter 4 and convinced himself that it was all his fault, it helped show just how broken he is now. (Question, in chapter 3 was Schuldich convincing him that yes Yohji had raped him in the bathroom, or that he was angry about it considering how quickly he justified it to himself when he was left alone?) And when he woke up in chapter 6 it was scary to find out that he thought he'd raped Yohji, and the doctor's belief that Aya was being abused gave an interesting perspective on how things looked from outside of Weiss.
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Title: Additive As Hell
Reviewed By: Weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are not kidding when you say additive. My husband could not possible bitch more about the time I spend reading. Excellant chapter, you are keeping me on my toes in suspense. I am not patient when it come to stories, but your sotry has kept me captivated and hanging by a wire for more. My poor boys..so much pain..hope your a happy ending kind of author..Bravo
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 16:43 CDT
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Yes, evil is good...very good. To quote from the immortal classic Spaceballs "Evil will always win because good is dumb" But I'm a sucker for a happy ending, go figure. Anyway, great chapter. More evil Shu to come, yeah! And Nagi niceness, awe. I've always had a soft spot for the little telekenetic *sigh* Always looking forward to more of your excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 15:18 CDT
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ack this is so stressful. I usually hate Nagi but I like him in this fic, and even though I have a bad feeling you are going to do something to Ken and Omi, I'm glad they got a little loving first. Schuldig just plain creeps me out
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 12:13 CDT
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WHOOHOO, amazing...I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: The Bad Little Beta-er Gets a Nose Bleed
Reviewed By: Eternitys End (MM.org hates me for good i think) On: September 13, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say. Youji angst AND Youji uke. You made my day! Off to beta-ing like a good little bad beta-er. Cuz...now I definitely need more. WHY DIDN'T YOU PROD ME INTO MOTION SOONER!!!!!
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Title: The Bad Little Beta-er Continues
Reviewed By: Eternitys End (And MM.org still hates me) On: September 13, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite chapter so far...and its not just because of the Yohji angst...really its not. Although being the Youji-angst-fangirl that I am, it did do a hell of a lot! I'm still a horrible beta-er. So I'm diligently attempting to get back to that. >.< MORE!
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Title: The Bad Little Beta-er
Reviewed By: Eternitys End (Media Miner is yelling at me...) On: September 13, 2004 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* I'm such a bad Beta-er. Look at me! I'm reviewing the third chapter months later. I'm horrible! *grumble some more* I really like it. And the Youji angst is very promising looking. I can say that for sure because I'm going through and beta-ing chapter six as the page loads. (media miner is so slow). *glomp*
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Reviewed By: Bisexual Pygmie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 09:18 CDT
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What's with this constantly interuppting Ken and Omi when they're getting it on? I hope this is headed toward amazing 'it's been so long' sex and not some sort of catastrophe
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Reviewed By: ilovedaveyhavok On: September 05, 2004 15:23 CDT
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this chapter was soooo sad..... i want to go to japan, oh well i love ur story! update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jenna Muff On: August 28, 2004 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmagod. Ohmagod. Ohmagod. Absolutely fantastic. No words to express myself properly. I've just gone through and binged on all of your work, and I've decided to marry you. Love them all. Stupid word restriction hampering me from properly worshiping you as you deserve! Yohji raped--that was my idea for sequel to "I Hate Him." Interesting turnaround, seeing things from Yohji's POV; equally interesting (if fucked up) reaction from Aya. Suicide, eh? This is one shitty relationship. Wunderbar. I love thee. @Jen@ P.S. Ken and Omi are beautifully done, as well. Love them. Love Schu-Schu. Crawford is an ass. (Poor Yohji, and poor Aya, though. Wonder what they'll do when Aya wakes up? How will Yohji explain? I think, personally, that he ought to just tell the truth--he was raped, for god's sake. Aya couldn't possibly blame himself for the blood if he knew Yohji was already taken apart before he ever got around to poundin'. ...wait, this is Aya we're talking about. Of course he could. Delightful dumbass.)
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Title: Halcyon
Reviewed By: Halcyon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 23:19 CDT
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Great chapters so far, the story is starting to get very interesting. The turn of events is something I would have never expected. I also like how you're working the plot into the present Gluhen series. Brilliantly done. The cheating however on our playboy's part isn't so nice but it adds to the complexity of Yohji and Aya's relationship. And as for Ken and Omi, the sexual tension is indeed building and making the wait painfully sweet. Right Ken-kun. ^-^ Keep on bringin it on.
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chap! I hope Schuldig gets his in the end...hahaha....And oooh another Saiyuki fic with Gojyo/Sanzo?!?! I'm so happy! That pairing is hard to find and it's my fav. Yes pairings with Goku are just all kinds of wrong. Have fun in Japan you lucky thing you. Please DO come back inspired to write more.
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