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Reviewed By: touga On: August 16, 2004 10:13 CDT
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Ah, you actually did it! *applaudes* XD I will remember this tactic for future reference. Have fun in the land of the sun, Weiss and Gackt. Psst. Write some more on the plane! ~.^ Hmm. About the Gojyu/Sanzo thing. I think the reason there's not that much around, because Gojyu and Hakkai are such an OBVIOUS pairing. Gojyu chopped off his hair for Hakkai. They are meant to be. Just like our Yotan and Ayan. *pets Aya*
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Reviewed By: Yin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was good. I've been following your stories ever since you worte "I love Him." All I gotta say is WOW, this actually depressed me, right now I can't even smile, I'm pretty much pissed off at Schu and nearly tearing my hair out at Aya's stubborness and Yohji's drunken actions. But hey, I'll recover from my emotional tumoil, keep writing and bring on the angst!
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Reviewed By: vamos a jugar por la playa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're my hero.
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Title: Excellant ...
Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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More..more. Absolutly love your writing. Can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 16:16 CDT
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Well, I think I can sum up my reaction to this chapter as- Holy F-ing Shit! Yeah, I think that about covers it. Aya's reaction to the blood and suicide attempt left me speechless. I want more! Hope you have a wonderful time in Japan. I'm so jealous, I've always wanted to go there. *pokes husband with spork to get him to take me* And I have said it before but, damn you are good at this. And again, Gojyo and Sanzo pairings rule! Until next time...
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Reviewed By: CC On: August 12, 2004 11:57 CDT
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Ok, I'm now severly jealous of your vacation. Great story, I loved the first one too. Please come back all inspired so that the rest of us can benefit from your wonderful writing! Wow, that has to be the most drab review I've ever written. Loved the author notes. Jerry is good for those ind of quotes that you never knew you couldn't live without. Keep writing. Ja, CC
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 09:29 CDT
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*applauds* very good MediaMiner
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Title: On Pins and Needles
Reviewed By: Weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am on pins and needles waiting for you to finish and post a new chapter. After finishing "I hate him" and Devouring "come as you are" I can't wait to see where you go with this. You picked my favorite pair and made a kick ass drama. They could make a movie out of this. Love it Love it Love it. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, after a two day sit through reading and sneaking peeks while at work, I just had to comment on a fic at last! This is great work, I'm hanging by a thread waiting for the next part. I'm a fairly new fan to the series, so it's all new and enthralling to me, but I have to say your work has been very enjoyable!
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Reviewed By: illovedaveyhavok On: July 26, 2004 14:15 CDT
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i really, really like it!! can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a good job here. You have some grammar mistakes here and there but all in all, the story is interesting. Oh, and your style is more of Charles Dickens than Hemingway...
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 19:15 CDT
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Hehe, I got an A..thanks ^_~. Nya, I hate such things, uncomplete comments and stuff, ya know? Very good next chapter, enjoyed it very much! ~Ko-chan~
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Title: love that angst
Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 09:41 CDT
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Looks like I didn't win the award for first review for this chapter, meh. It's okay though because this was such an awesome chapter. I love the way you presented both Aya and Yohji as so fragile and needy. And you are absolutely correct, angst is a dish best served steaming hot and needs to be brought to a slow boil. Take your time with it...I did mention how much I love angst, right? I have just one small request, can you put translations for the German words that you use? Some are obvious but I would like to know exactly what Shu is saying. Anyway, no bodily threats this time but please update whenever you can and yes, I have seen History of the World, Part 1 :) Great story!
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Reviewed By: ann ime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been enyoying this since way back at the beginning with "I Hate Him". Very enjoyable! Ch 4 has to be my favorite so far, Shuldig is so evil. Can't ever let himself feel 'nice'. Remember, details are our friend!!
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great sequel so far to I Hate Him. I so hope Yohji doesn't cheat on Aya and vice vs, being that I really do like happy endings (sob). Damn Schu...looking forward to the next chap (which will hopefully be soon) to see where you take this one. Looks like it's turning even darker, then again you may pull a major twist on us all and have Schu save the day in the end..bwahahaha...too fun.
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