| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was sweet - how they're both thinking about each other (reluctantly or not). Please keep going and update as soon as possible! I really love this fic and am always excited when I find out the next chapter is out!
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Title: Mythos
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 22:45 CDT
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OK, is it just me, or does anyone else think Pink Floyd's "Mother" would be a great theme song for Iria? O.O I'm glad that Heero is having a tough time forgetting Shini. I hope it keeps gnawing away at him. I even hope whenever a bird shits on his helmet, he's reminded of Shini. (No, I don't know why that would remind him, just that I hope it does.) While I think it's a noble gesture, I'm going to miss the way Shinigami spoke. At least he's showing a little intestinal fortitude...
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (nsi) On: May 11, 2005 07:42 CDT
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Shini's learning english, Heero's miserable, Shini's mommy says Heero's a jerk. Where does the 1x2 pairing come into full affect? Does Shini start acting more like Duo would and does he ever get back to Hee-chan? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: gw On: May 06, 2005 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i do love the story so please update sooon....
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Title: The Arrogance of Mortals
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:24 CDT
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I don't dare say this fic can get any sadder, because I'm afraid you'd take it as a challenge! I was so happy as I started reading the first part of this chapter, then Iria showed up and things... changed. I won't place 100% of the blame on her; after all, Heero did say it more than once, even if he was upset. But oh, what a wretched picture it made when Shini made his presence known. Sweetie, I really can't afford the amount of Kleenex I'm going through just on this fic alone. If anything, I'm ready for some happy tears, yanno? I need a Shini Plushie...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:16 CDT
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ya know if Duo's Mom would have kept her mouth shut and did the responsible and check up on her son instead railing on Heero then Heero would have never said the things he had said. IN fact he told 'her' to get out, twice, he didn't mention anything about shini until the stupid goddess continued her insults and throwing his behaviour toward shini at him. *shakes head* wow so we have quite a wait on the next update... hmmm hurry!
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Title: ch26
Reviewed By: justkat more. On: April 26, 2005 20:21 CDT
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Iria really is the Mother-in-Law from Hell isn't she!!! And the Mother from Hell for that matter. Poor Shini!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 26, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah...you better finish it! You can't just leave poor Shini like that. Poor kid. Just left, all sad. Please continue and update soon. (And be nice to Shini!)
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 07:44 CDT
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Oh poor Shini! Heero is such an ass. He hurt his feewings and now he's sad. Go apologize now, baka!!!! *Heero glares* Arghh! *hits Heero in the head with a big fan* Heero: Gomen nasai, Shini That's better. ^_^ Update soon!
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Title: For the Sake of Heaven
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 21:50 CDT
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Beautiful descriptive text once again; you pay great attention to detail but don't go overboard. I loved Iria's little "snit" too. As humorous as it was, I could so empathize with her maternal frustration over the things that us moms go through while trying our best to raise our children. I didn't know whether to laugh or cry or throw something against the wall right along with the goddess. It was a no-brainer with Heero's quest and Shini, though. Boo hoo-ville. It wasn't difficult to picture the poor god in the grasp of the Drains. He was just so pitiful. That weak tail wagging didn't help. *Sign* Dammit, that's all I can write for now. Need more Kleenex.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 20:30 CDT
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"...I realized there's at least seven arcs of MSMH I want to cover" *Glomps Kaitsurinu* I'm so happy that theres more, oh man!!!! and you said there's angst to come?! i can't wait to read more, you are a wonderful writer you know. I can't thank you enough for sharing and sticking with us.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 20, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Too good! I was so worried that Shini would die before Heero got to him! It was so cute how Shini took the food so reluctantly just so Heero wouldn't bother him anymore and let him sleep. Please update soon cause I love it!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 13:53 CDT
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AWWWW! Shini and Heero are too cute together! Oh and WAAHHHHH! I can't believe it's coming to an end so soon. I really liked reading this fic. *sigh* Oh well, I'll just have to read something else of yours.
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Title: ch 25
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaaaayyy!!! Heero saved him!!! Yippee yiyo kiyay!! (Gotta love phonetic spelling!) And in the nick of time too! ^______^ Poor sick Shini. Great description; it made my bones ache just reading it! I especially liked his poor, sick, stringy tail thumping weakly on the ground, setting fire to all around no doubt. So cute! Thanks for another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: LiZzArD [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and you have to add to it. I want to know what happens to Shini. I also think you would have a promising career as an author.
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