| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Make Shini better! Poor little deity! And Heero's upset, too. (Can't have that, can we?) Please continue - this really is a good fic.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch22-24 : I think you should post that story and not be evil as you sugeest and make us poor reviewers suffer while we await for your updates. GaWWWW have i told you I love your vocabulary and boy do I love this story, at the end of ch24 i'm very worried for Shini, it is moving too fast and I fear for him when Heero finally finds him. Beautifully written as always. DAmn it can't he use that red thread around his finger to Find Shini/Duo!!!?? More MoRE plEASE!
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Title: Ch 24
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear oh dear oh *dear*!! *Poor* Shini!!! Please save him soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sini-chan. He'll be okay right? I feel soo sorry for him. Update as soon as possible so I can find out what happens!!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW~! So great! I am loving your fiction more and more! I hope Shini doesn't get any worse!!!! I'm so glad that Heero is seeming to show more affection, its sweet! Keep up the good work~! I can't wait for the next chapter update~!!!n_n
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 19:12 CST
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Poor Shini. First Heero was being so frigid towards him and now this! Happy Ending, need much. He's too cute to anything really tragic happen to him!
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 17:46 CST
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Heero is a real stick in the mud! Hope Shini can loosen him up soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 15:30 CST
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Hey! I love this story! Heero is sort of an ass for leaving poor Shini all by himself and making him cry in the first couple of chaps, but I forgive him. I love the way you made Duo so sweet in this on without going over board with it. I think he's sooo KAWAII! Update soon. Ja matte ne!
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Title: ch 23
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!!! Poor Shini! Please save him soon ...he's so cute and so forlorn! Great story. I am enjoying it very much. Thanks heaps!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:53 CST
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Awww, as much as poor pitiful Shini made me want to snuggle him and give him chicken soup... no wait, that would make him worse... Anyway, as much as I wanted to snuggle him, I loved Heero's demeanor in this chapter. He was comforting and attentive to Shini and thought of himself as *gasp!* Shini's husband!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 12, 2005 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Shini! I hope he will be OK, if not in the next chapter then sometime soon. Please keep going. It's soooo good!
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Reviewed By: priscel - On: March 10, 2005 04:35 CST
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I figured it out! Shini sounds a little like elmo *snickers* and now he's got the shrinks? will he also shrink in size, be the height of or age of his behavior *grins* gosh I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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EEK!! MINI SHINI~!!!!! I dont think it'd even be safe for a human to eat 3 bowls of icecream...Sugar high of doom...then a sugar low from he**... o.o; Keep up the good work~! I just got a quickie question...Are you going to add the rest of the Gundam Wing cast? (I cant remember if you added them or not so I thought now would be a good time to ask.)
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Title: I think I'm getting addicted to your fiction! n_n
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you're keeping Shini in his out of character state. Your writing flows smoothsly and it makes everything that much more enticing for the reader...or so I think. n.n; I like it when Heero gets a bit flustered when he cant help getting caught in Shini's snares. It's just so cute~! I read chapters 18-20 in one sitting so somethings in the different chapters ran together for me, but I absolutely loved their roof time together. That was sweet beyond reason. The way that Heero relaxed near his teishu was just wonderful. But my favorite part has got to be the part where they're on the bike at the stoplight. I do the same thing to people...not everyone waves back though. A few do...but most stare at me like I have ADHD or something. Keep the fiction going, I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next~!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 17:27 CST
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I loved the interaction in this chapter - it appears that Heero is becoming more at ease around Shinigami. His shy glances seem to have replaced his earlier glares. The historical bit was nice. How sweet that Iria researched Heero for her son - I can just imagine a spoiled kid in a candy story pestering his mother for something he's seen until she gives in. Now I have to wonder how much divine intervention was involved in getting Heero invited to the TV show... So why did Shini have to go and step back when he did? What's his devious mind up to?
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