| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Muffie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 17:56 CDT
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I like this one! Very original and it's keeping my interest rather well. I like the way you've made ol' Shinigami. He's very amusing. You've got a couple of nice caricatures of the characters without being cliched or dull.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 04:02 CDT
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*spins excitedly in her chair* i don't have anything to say so I thought I say that. ShiniDuo's so cute and the way he speaks reminds me a bit of Kenshin. Another interesting chapter! keep it coming (^_^)
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Reviewed By: LainoftheAzureSky On: August 18, 2004 12:40 CDT
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^^. Well, I feel bad that youy feel so old, but I'm elated that you updated...wait...rhyme very much not intended...Anyway, this chapter went along just as well as the others, and the little images of what Shini's going to do in Japan flitting around in my head. Thank you for updating, and I hope you get another chapter up soon! ^_^ Happy Birthday on the 20th! mines on the 23...
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Reviewed By: LainoftheAzureSky On: August 05, 2004 20:08 CDT
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I'm glad that you were finally able to update, but now I feel kinda bad for Heero ^^; I'd be tearing out my hair if I had to take care of Shini even for a couple days...Please update again soon, but have a good time wherever you're going as well. Well done on another awesome chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: Alea On: August 04, 2004 16:00 CDT
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totally awesome cant wait for another chap ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Shini! His innocence is so endearing, yet every once in awhile he lets a little bit of "Mr. Conniving Smartass" show through. The way he talks in the third person is too cute. I was howling at the description of Shini's exploration of the inside of the taxi... with his tongue among other things! Then, when he "greeted" Rita - OMFG - I thought I would wet myself!!! "It would be nice seeing you in Hell someday! Shini hopes so, very much so." OMFG, that is too rich! Poor Heero. What has he gotten himself into? This is a highly entertaining fic so far, kiddo. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Priscel *Oi* On: August 04, 2004 00:03 CDT
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*grins* yes get them home to ehdo *very sleepy sory if i spelled it wrong. update soon please and boy I can't wait for bath time with duo cuz he needs it no?
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 18:53 CDT
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Hey, I hope that you come back soon. Enjoy yourself, but don't forget your promise to the readers to update when you get back, 'kay? ^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel *blinks away sleep from her eyes* On: July 26, 2004 07:02 CDT
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no worries have fun, relax and thanks for the update. oh and the sweet little kiss.
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Reviewed By: priscel OHAYO!! [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:14 CDT
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"The Goddess of Love disappeared into the cabin and settled herself down in the window seat to the left, dusting off the fabric before sitting down and crossing her legs, Sharon Stone style." *snickers* man she really reminds me of someone oversexed mom who has to do that extra thing to make the younger generation be like damn... maybe you should got get ya moms spaded *snickers* Many Duo is so Damn CUTE! KAWAII!!!MUY BONITO y GUAPO!!! Can't wait to see how like with heero pans out. *this little hentai wants kissy face...* I can't help i guess I'm a sex crazed person at heart. (^_^)
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 08:05 CDT
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hey I like it. it's really good. I hope it's not done, but u can't help but think what does Heero have plan running away with his husband following him? but I truly can't help wait until u post another chap.
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Reviewed By: Seishuku Tsuki (Kage Tsuki, just not logged in...) On: July 01, 2004 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is one of the most interesting stories I've ever read, and I can't wait for you to update ^_^ Please let it be soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 12:15 CDT
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Wahoo!! Go Duo!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 13:22 CDT
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Hey! oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man! think I said that enough? *snickers* Heero's in danger and what ya know Duo is headed that way- out of curosity? or because he's going to go kick some demon bootay!? This is good and to comment on your earlier explanation for the title of your story... I liked it from the start very interesting and very different. can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Sevun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I utterly love this...Duo is SOOOO cute in this...you must (under penalty of non-stop whining from me) continue this fic..and soon..please soon??? *teary chibi eyes*:)
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