| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 20:10 CDT
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Cool. Rin's in it. Lemmie guess. shess will fall in love and rin will fall in love...love at first sight...AWWWW!!! Great story. You'r grammer is always getting better! :) Keep up the good work. AND UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 13:55 CDT
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I like your story alot and it is very good.Don't let assholes get you down.Font Color
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good so far. i think your writing is great for someone who speaks english as a second language. kepp it up. ps. it's tomorrow not to morrow. (ok sorry i had to point that out.. otherwise it's whatever.)
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Reviewed By: Lady_Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! It's great, different for the most part, so very original. I am so very thankful that you started writing it again. It's fantasmic! Is Inuyasha going to find out about Kouga soon? Btw, do you have a Beta reader?
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this! You are doing so well. I can't help but notice that you are making so many improvments. Your fic is coming together so well. You have made the fic easier to understand for every one. Your teacher should be very proud of you. I hope that Inu\Kag and Rin\Sess hit it off during the party. That would just make the girls night.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 19:30 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWW! CUTE CHAPTER!!! AWWWWWWWWW! He better be kidding when he said he was kidding [ablout foolin Kagome that he loved her but tricked her....do you understand that? I don't really i think i got it wrong but i hope you know what i mean. ] Well I'm glad Inuyasha is taking Kagome to his dad's party than *shudders* kikyo... This is an awesome story. Definitly [i don't think i spelled that right...oh well -_-'] one of my favourites most favourites. Your doind an awesome job. Keep the good work up. Update soon! n_n
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be having fun with this, keep going. Now that you have them in some kind of relationship, I don't mean boyfriend\girlfriend, just something that they are trying to get comfortable with play with for awhile. Like I said before you're doing great. Does Inu get a long with Sess? Is Rin in this fic?
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too funny! You are going to make her have a heart attack if you keep going. But I do like the fact that you put a cliff hanger in. This way we will see sort of where you plan on going with these two and how soon. Your writing has been improving. I don't want to sound like a teacher, but I am proud of you. Continue to write, because it seems the more you write the more you open up and let things flow. You get more into detail without making it seem boring.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapt. Very cute. BREAK UP WITH KIKYO NOW!!!! GAWD DAMMIT I HATE HER!!!! when she get's dump everyone will be happy *wink* Keep up the good work and update soon>!
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Reviewed By: Interested Observer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 22:23 CDT
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ITS AWESOME! I THINK ITS GREAT THAT YOUR WRITING!!:D
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 15:18 CDT
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Great chappie as usual. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know Miss Thang didn't come to Kagome's house and say in front of everybody that she didn't like her??? She is just too much! I like the fact that Inu gave Kag the ring that belonged to his mother and not to Kikyo. I also liks the fact that you didn't make him blind to the fact that Kikyo hates Kagome. It made his gift to her that much better.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:36 CDT
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All together now..1..2..3..AWWWWWWWWW! That was so sweet!! Plz update soon.Oh and thanxs for the 3 chappies!!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! YOU ARE AWESOME! 3 CHAPTERS!!!! I loved them all! Kudos to you for the three amazing chapters. And i'm glad that you\'re still updating. I love this story so so so so so so so much! Keep it up and I love this story! n_n Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:15 CDT
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Hey! I really like your fic. It's cute! ^_^ Don't worry about what people say about your spelling and grammer. They can deal with it. My mom has the same problem, even when she's talking. Don't be afraid to ask for help if you need it. Please continue with your story. I really want to see what happens next. ^_^
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