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Title: I'm in love! (again)
Reviewed By: Dharmaserenity (jana) On: May 29, 2005 01:01 CDT
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Vegeta is so dreamy in this, and being a wonderful father. *dies* Very enjoyable. A sad ending, but somehow complete nonetheless. Trunks is very young and does have a lot to go through in life before settling down. So, I don't know. I think it would be interesting to see what happens in seven years.
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Title: Just read chappie 8
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:21 CDT
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God, Vegeta was soooo adorable in this... I laughed out loud when Trunks say that it was Waaay too much information when Vegeta let out that he and Bulma had the best sex after an argument. Ahh, my Vegeta crush is renewed!! Very adorable, and yeah, I'd keep his shirt too. Poor guy would run out of shirts in no time eventually.
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Title: Just read chap 3
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity (jana) On: May 26, 2005 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read chapter 3, and I like this very much already. I love how you portray Vegeta's dissapointment (want to give him a hug so bad, but what else is new?). I love how Trunks IS an 18 year old in this, and how he wants to find himself. Aww, and I think Bra is cute - hopefully Trunks sees it soon too. I look forward to reading the rest. Oh, and a very confident Goten is just so sexy for some reason. LOL
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Title: Becoming Trunks
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 22:19 CST
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well i did as you said and i read this story..It was wonderful moving and very sad to me..almost of a mirror to me. i felt what you where saying in this story and i thank you for telling me to read it..it HELPED ME and for that i'll be alwas greatful to you Robin.....your a true friend to me...maria
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:57 CDT
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What a lovely love story. I love accidental love stories and this is a beaut! It was bittersweet with just enough promise of a future together to satisfy. I really enjoyed the witty repartee and broad humor as well. (I died when V and G got out of the car to beat on each other! So typical!) Enjoyed it immensely!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 13:19 CDT
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An epilogue would be good but a sequel would be even better. Thanks for writing the story--I enjoyed it. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: LadyWindelf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 15:17 CDT
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great chapter, but you must write an epilogue, you can't leave Trunks and Miyuki like that. They must be together (wedding! ;P, just an idea floating in the air..) Anyway, if you do another chapter, write it soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 20:17 CDT
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You do need an epilogue to finish off the story. This is only part of the path, that everyone walks, and you need to show how these experiences shaped Trunks' life and helped define the man he became, even if they have both moved on. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 10:35 CDT
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I'm so sorry it took me this long to review. I love it when people still have Vegeta acting paternal. I really liked the way you do so while still allowing him to keep his essential Vegetaness. This is an excellent story of self discovery, wether(sp?) it has the happy ending or not. Sadly, I do see and end comming but I look forward to reading it. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 22:16 CDT
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oh that chapter 12 was something. I felt for Vegeta. I felt for everybody. Nicely handled drama.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi the angst, the drama! what happened to Miyuki? Where is she? oh boy, so many questions, so little time! Update, can't wait!!! ^__^ love, BD.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:07 CDT
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Oh no - relapse is the thing a recovering addict of any kind fears. Let's hope Miyuki didn't cave and is just somewhere doing some serious thinking. As rough as it was, I think Vegeta and Trunks needed that fight. Without it, I somehow doubt Vegeta would have made his offer at the end of this chapter. Very good work, once again!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:33 CDT
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Oh damn. Poor Trunks. I guess he's going to college now. Possibly MIT. Where he could be within traveling distance of a New York Office and yet major in something dealing with Technology? Looking forward to reading more. -El-
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Reviewed By: LadyWindelf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 12:20 CDT
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Another fun chapter! Poor Miyuki getting all covered by mud and all. Hope the dinner will be less dirtying. Continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 22:19 CDT
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Ok, so far I've only written really short reviews (nothing to harp on). But I do try to leave at least one long review for every story that I follow. Um hm here it goes. This was just funny. The interaction with Goku and Vegeta had me rolling. Vegeta not liking technology and having trouble with a cell phone - I liked its place in the story and how you used it but I must admit I didn't buy it. It was the whole traveling throughout space and using a scouter to communicate thing. The driving was funny. Your characterizations are solid. I like the way you describe an emotion rather than tell the emotion (the cigarette thing). As far as headlines. In the tabloids: "Capsule heir gets mugged." "Briefs dad says no to new girlfriend." I think that the respectable papers would bury it on the society pages as a family fiasco. Ok, so its at least longer than all the others. Thank you for writing. -El-
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