"Becoming Trunks" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: daisygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 16:41 CDT Comment/Review: I'm still here and still reading, I PROMISE... That admition to Trunks has brought them somewhat closer together, and Trunks seems very understanding.
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Reviewed By: daisygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 16:14 CDT Comment/Review: That's so sweet that Vegeta was willing to come around to Trunks and that Trunks is willing to admit that maybe he misjudged his father. I'll have to get back to the story late thought. Sorry out of time today!
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Reviewed By: daisygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 16:01 CDT Comment/Review: AW, Trunks first time... That's sad that she's willing to give up though, like that it can't work she she gets what she wants.
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Reviewed By: daisygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:46 CDT Comment/Review: Their in shit now... 0_o I hope Vegeta doesn't go TOO hard on them. I'm really glad I don't have to wait on the next chapter. Times like this I really don't mind cliffies.
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Title: aka SSJ-daisy Reviewed By: daisygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:29 CDT Comment/Review: Awww... How sweet. That must have been pure torture for the two to act like they didn't know each other when they were already going out. I love the irony that Bulma was trying to get Trunks to ask her out and Trunks trying to convice her it was true. Pure comedy. I can't belive that this story was finished here the entire time and I was waiting for each chapter to be written at DA. Thank you so much for telling me where to find it. ~daisy
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Title: I'm in love! (again) Reviewed By: Dharmaserenity (jana) On: May 29, 2005 01:01 CDT Comment/Review: Vegeta is so dreamy in this, and being a wonderful father. *dies* Very enjoyable. A sad ending, but somehow complete nonetheless. Trunks is very young and does have a lot to go through in life before settling down. So, I don't know. I think it would be interesting to see what happens in seven years.
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Title: Just read chappie 8 Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:21 CDT Comment/Review: God, Vegeta was soooo adorable in this... I laughed out loud when Trunks say that it was Waaay too much information when Vegeta let out that he and Bulma had the best sex after an argument. Ahh, my Vegeta crush is renewed!! Very adorable, and yeah, I'd keep his shirt too. Poor guy would run out of shirts in no time eventually.
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Title: Just read chap 3 Reviewed By: dharmaserenity (jana) On: May 26, 2005 11:01 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've just read chapter 3, and I like this very much already. I love how you portray Vegeta's dissapointment (want to give him a hug so bad, but what else is new?). I love how Trunks IS an 18 year old in this, and how he wants to find himself. Aww, and I think Bra is cute - hopefully Trunks sees it soon too. I look forward to reading the rest. Oh, and a very confident Goten is just so sexy for some reason. LOL
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Title: Becoming Trunks Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 22:19 CST Comment/Review: well i did as you said and i read this story..It was wonderful moving and very sad to me..almost of a mirror to me. i felt what you where saying in this story and i thank you for telling me to read it..it HELPED ME and for that i'll be alwas greatful to you Robin.....your a true friend to me...maria
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:57 CDT Comment/Review: What a lovely love story. I love accidental love stories and this is a beaut! It was bittersweet with just enough promise of a future together to satisfy. I really enjoyed the witty repartee and broad humor as well. (I died when V and G got out of the car to beat on each other! So typical!) Enjoyed it immensely!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 13:19 CDT Comment/Review: An epilogue would be good but a sequel would be even better. Thanks for writing the story--I enjoyed it. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: LadyWindelf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 15:17 CDT Comment/Review: great chapter, but you must write an epilogue, you can't leave Trunks and Miyuki like that. They must be together (wedding! ;P, just an idea floating in the air..) Anyway, if you do another chapter, write it soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 20:17 CDT Comment/Review: You do need an epilogue to finish off the story. This is only part of the path, that everyone walks, and you need to show how these experiences shaped Trunks' life and helped define the man he became, even if they have both moved on. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 10:35 CDT Comment/Review: I'm so sorry it took me this long to review. I love it when people still have Vegeta acting paternal. I really liked the way you do so while still allowing him to keep his essential Vegetaness. This is an excellent story of self discovery, wether(sp?) it has the happy ending or not. Sadly, I do see and end comming but I look forward to reading it. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 22:16 CDT Comment/Review: oh that chapter 12 was something. I felt for Vegeta. I felt for everybody. Nicely handled drama.
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