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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 17:48 CDT
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WOW! you are a writer that likes to keep the reader in suspense. And now "I HAVE TO KNOW" what happens next. It's one of those things that drive you crazy untill you know. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 22:55 CDT
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Angst at its best... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally got back to this story. I've been so busy that I haven't been able to read but damn it I was determined to finaly catch up. I love the way this fic if turnning out. I was crushed for kagome when he said "no". Please I noticed it's been a while sinced you updated and I know that it's been a while since i've read but I "solemly swear to read every chapter and review" if you update this story It's the best one i've read so far.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do love your story. It is lovely and makes me think. I feel so bad for Kagome and what she is going through. And poor Inuyasha, he only seems to make it worse. I hope that you update soon so I can get to read your wonderful story. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Diablos_II On: March 14, 2005 20:48 CST
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BWAH!!! You updated!! YAY!! He doesn't even love her in the end. Or is this coming close to the End? Just Please dont make this into a Kouga or Sesshomaru and Kagome fic, It would break my heart. I know what Im saying is probobly REALLY annoying to an author to have a little reviewer say what they should and shouldn't do, but Im really not trying to say you can't, Im just trying to express my own opinions, Basically I hope Kagome doesn't run off into the arms of her once lovers brother, I personally think that's really Cliche...anyways since I've efficiantly taken away some of your time, I'll go now with Just saying That I think your story is AWSOME!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 00:46 CST
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Oy. its interesting that you didn't portray Inu and Kagome haveing the perfect relationship[, as you often see them having. But a little light and love never hurt anyone. This really isn't a flame, i like the story, i just wasn't in the mood to cry right now, but your story hooked me, so I'm now hooked on a story that is making me cry. its really very well written too. Normally you see stories written in third person, but first was a good choice. Well, until you update again.
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Title: great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: essie2 On: March 10, 2005 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow omg damn he did not even love her damn update
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Title: *crying*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 10, 2005 01:21 CST
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The level of angst is unbelievable. Of all the things he could say to her question, I never would have guessed he'd say "no" to her. After everything Kagome's been through, all the strangeness she's dealing with and all the uncertainty...to tell her that he doesn't love her...he might as well have been hammering nails into her coffin. Her poor, young, trusting and tender heart...broken...shattered just as surely as the Shikon no Tama had when her arrow found it's target. So to, has InuYasha's words found their target...bullseye. --- Oh, please tell me things will get better.
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Title: oo wow
Reviewed By: Panthera On: February 16, 2005 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww THANK U FOR UPDATING!! COOKIES FOR U!!! YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!!! u leave it with such cliffies!! ^^ ~Val~
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Reviewed By: not on mediaminer On: February 14, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god... Thats all I can say. I absolutley love this story, I was so happy to find out It was updated. For me your story makes me all chilly and tense, just wondering whats going to happen next...but you left chapter 13 off at such a horrible place!! Im so exited and nervous to see what happens next, so pleeaasee update soon. I swear I will worship you with a little mini shrine when you finish this story, just so I can read the whole thing over, and over again. Cant wait!!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 19, 2005 23:11 CST
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Darnit! You ended the visit with Hiroshi and sent Kagome off to one of her infamous baths, then left us hanging!! Not fair! I really want to know if InuYasha is redemable in Kagome's eyes. So much pain...so many terrible things, around and between them causing enormous friction. Their relationship may be irrepairable.
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Reviewed By: Panthera On: January 17, 2005 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAA it was sooo short!!!! WWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA please update soon!! I'm sooo happy u updated^^ Love, ~Panthera~
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 12, 2005 09:36 CST
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Just found this story. Very interesting ideas! It really takes a different track than most I/K stories. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:22 CST
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Hey now, that's a terrible place to leave it. ----You weren't kidding when you said this was "dark" in content. I almost quit reading when InuYasha became so aggressive. He has always been aware of and gentle with Kagome. Jealousy yes, but never cruel nor physically violent to her. He could never hurt her, not deliberately...and there's the rub; deliberately. Loosing control is never a pretty thing, and that's what we're talking about here. InuYasha loosing control of his temper, not communicating (as usual) and loosing control of his youkai half. A very bad combination. We also have Kagome loosing control of her life, her emotions...and loosing touch with reality...in essence; loosing herself. They say that one should write what they know...and I hope that wherever the knowledge came from or whoever inspired this story has found balance and peace just as I hope that Kagome and InuYasha find theirs. ---- You had me in tears. I will await further postings. ---- Damned fine job of writing!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666;;nsi;; On: January 10, 2005 19:49 CST
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you take so long to update, then you end it with a cliffy??!! how coooooouuuld yoooh??!
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