| "Inevitable" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 00:46 CDT
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That's different. He says "no" when she asks him if he loves her? Completely unexpected.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 00:08 CDT
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Well that explains the house and servants. How neat that they got a relatively nice and understanding lord!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 23:33 CDT
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You know, you could have said in the previous entry that it was Kohaku. It wasn't exactly obvious who had died. I do thank you for explaining seppuku!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 22:41 CDT
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Did you just kill Miroku? Did you have someone kill off Miroku while he was purifying himself? You certainly aren't being nice! What happened to Miroku?!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 22:27 CDT
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He goes phsyco demon and almost rapes her, soemthing we know he would never do when normal, then reverts just in time for Kagome to let him have it. I hope nobody comes across Kagome while she is in this state, especially this state of undress.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 22:02 CDT
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That final battle must have been something, but why is Shippo dying?!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 21:54 CDT
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Why is Trepidations and Reprecussion exactly the same?
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 21:40 CDT
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Isn't she twenty? Why is she still afraid of her mother finding out?
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 21:28 CDT
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Oops! Clumsy virgin hanyou ruined their special moment. However, it seems more likely than what the other people write for the pair's first time.
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Reviewed By: Tetsuya Yamatashi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 21:19 CDT
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I absolutley love how you have made the story realistic to the feudal time. I mean, I'm all for 'happy endings' and all, but Realistically, Love didn't really mean a thing back then. I like how you have put that into your story. Second of all I want to gove a two thumbs up. You brought me to tears, and I'll tell you, that is not easy. So all in all, thankyou, so much for such a good story. I can't wait to see the end, but at the same time, I want to keep reading your story. well, good luck and I'm praying that you dont come down with writer's block at the last moment!
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: June 18, 2005 21:05 CDT
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this is great can't wait till next update
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 00:46 CDT
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Dun dun dun. Three guesses as to who it is. You'd think he'd have the decorum to not bother Shippo, but, then again, he slashed some poor servant. I think Inuyasha does really cre about Kagome, but its just not turned out well in this story. Your choice, I guess. I really love the writing. The descriptions and word usage is brilliant. It is a little sad at times (understatement) but that is the author's choice. Great chapter, and looking forward to the next one! (now to find a happy fluffy bunny story...)
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Title: kagome179@aol.com
Reviewed By: Kagome179 On: May 19, 2005 01:06 CDT
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thisis a really nice story i hope you update soon. And whats a 'consort'?
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 00:14 CDT
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Man. What an ass. Jerk...whatever. I feel so sorry for Kagome. I'm crying too...it seems like everytime i read this story or part of it i start crying. and i'm not an easily crying person. I guess i like happinness and rainbows and pretty girls....but I also read good writing, which must be why i'm reading this story. don't take this as a flame..the story is very good.
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Title: dddddddd
Reviewed By: essie2 On: May 03, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that was the damn bomb please update soon
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