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Title: My god!
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fanfiction. So full of drama. It's really good that Trunks was alive in the end. Seneca would not be pleased. This was one of the most original stories that I have ever read, and I would love a sequel ^^ -- MaraiTrunks --
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Title: Fantastic Story!!!
Reviewed By: starangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB!!! couldn't stop reading it, finished at 11 on a school night, I'll be cursing you in the morning, But right now it's worth it! are you writing a sequel? or are you just continueing with it from here? Having Trunks die at the end of the last chapter was so heartbreaking!!! Then to bring him back in the next chapter! You are my new favorite author! I'll reccomend you to anyone who loves DBZ fanfiction! Though your story was fantastic, you did confuse me with some grammar mistakes. I under stood what you were trying to say though so its all good! Again GREAT story! Loved every second of it!
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Reviewed By: free-sprit not logged in On: September 21, 2005 08:57 CDT
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About time! MONTHS!? you can't do that! that's evil! what am I going to do until then? maybe i'll should just sleep....
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Title: ..................
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 20, 2005 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooooo. cant wait, man ur stories are are so so ....... perfect
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: mlf(maccam) On: September 20, 2005 22:29 CDT
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ICAN'TBELIEVETHATYOURWRITINGASEQUALHUGSYOUSOOOOOOHARD... Ok i'm back to normal and happy that your going to write this *SMILES* as i go to sleep...*HUGS*
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Title: forgot something
Reviewed By: me again, free-sprit, not logged in On: August 30, 2005 09:06 CDT
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I forgot Seneca! what about her!? It's gonna destroy her! Bulma and Bra goes to earth, and they collect the Dragonballs and then thery wish trunks back top life, right? Pretty please? he can't stay dead, it's just now right.
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: free-sprit - not logged in On: August 30, 2005 09:04 CDT
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I was so sure, that I never finnished this story, so I decided to read it again. AAAH! Why did he have to die? whywhywhw? I mean, I cried! they had searched for him in such a long time, and then he just.... *sighs* I loved the story. Please please please please write a sequal! But don't you dare write it yet, finnish Finding Peace first, and then start on a sequal to this. Maybe just a one shot to show how tings really ended, or how things gonna look in the future. K? I would love that. And many others would love that. Your writing is quite popular. Thanks, love your writing, byebe
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Reviewed By: Person. On: February 25, 2005 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh... that is SOOO sad. :( I wish things could have been different but... i guess it makes sense in a way. thats so sad that Trunks is dead and he never fully lived his life with his family and girlfriend. and that he never fully got his memory back!! but anyway... will a sequel work? but it was a great story non-the-less.
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Title: so blue
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooo this can't be the ending really truly the ending..>.< but why this story is great and for you to just end it..poor trunks and the rest of the family they didn't get a chance to be with him .and his girlfriend on earth..ohhhh i can't stand this. the ending is not what i was hoping..i know we don't have happt endings all the time, but damn..anyway i'll miss this story VERY MUCH!!!! and i'm sorry that it's over.....maria
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Reviewed By: jkashfuidsf On: February 22, 2005 22:02 CST
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umm....that was a gay ending....you had the best story and u ended it liek that? i will change my opinion if theres a sequal...cuz there are to many loose ends that u didnt tie up....but yeah..i mean the ending was okay...but really confuseing and ....not that good you could do better. over all good job
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Title: ehem
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: February 22, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tell theres a sequal!
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Title: What?
Reviewed By: Sluggy who is too lazy to sign in On: February 22, 2005 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh... That wasn't an ending. There had better be a sequel because there are WAY too many loose ends you need to tie up. Overall good, but yeah... the THE END was just confusing.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: February 21, 2005 23:23 CST
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que? the end... tell me there is more... its so good... ok I really liked the story... it had a great build up and the b/v was well written good job
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Title: master of slugs
Reviewed By: Sluggy who is too lazy to sign in On: February 11, 2005 12:08 CST
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There's no way you're ending it like that, right? Right? Geez, can Vejiita stand any more guilt trips in his lifetime?
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Reviewed By: FreeFallin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Omg... I wouldnt have expected this to happen! Tragic! ohh... I wish Trunks could have survived. Vegeta beat Kooler so thats good. He killed him right? But still! Its sooo sad! Hope, just hope, Trunks makes it somehow... Great Story by the Way! So sad that its ending.
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