| "the u.s.a spirit detectives?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 14:44 CDT
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ok ok ok I tout of a name!!! drum roll please!!! her name is...umm hold on a sec...I got it!no I dont..now I do for real this time Stella ok I know corny name but it was the best I could think of...PLEASE LET ME BE IN THE FIC PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! ok thats all update soon! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
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Title: Here's a guy for ya
Reviewed By: FeithCaios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 10:19 CDT
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Name: Skur Gender: male Age: 17 Race: Human ('cuz I'm too lazy to think up a demon type for him) History: Raised in an apocalyptic enviroment, Skur trusts very few people. He prefers to work by himself, but will work wiht others if you pay him enough. Clothing: Army pants with black muscle shirt. Combat boots Partners: He doesn't have any Status: Umm, he probably will remain single, but if you want to pair him off with someone, then feel free to Physical description: Tall, muscular, hot (sorry, but I want him to be), white hair (all hot guys have it), umm, you choose the color of his eyes Attitude: That of a mercenary, he's only doing it for the money, so he's quiet, cold and insensitive. Sorry, but there's no good side to this guy that anyone can see Strength: When he's paid Weakness: When people offer him money, He's a greedy little bastard huh?
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: WereAngewomon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 17, 2004 22:29 CDT
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Sha is a bat demon i forgot to tell u that... sha likes to sleep upside down (like a real bat) when she is be new people
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 17, 2004 22:22 CDT
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i'll be good .but turn evil .. if that will help
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 20:14 CDT
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Hey!! Thanks for putting me in!!Its great so far!!Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 19:26 CDT
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YAY!!! you updated!!! i LOVE it!! pelase update soon!
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Title: SORY!!!!
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 12:42 CDT
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SORY SORY SORY SORY SORY!!!!!! I forgot she wears black leather boots and never backs down to a fight sory!!! oh ya and update soon!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!YAY!!!
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Reviewed By: spirtq On: June 17, 2004 07:27 CDT
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:31 CDT
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SORRY! I'm aveary forgetfull person... any way I want the character I made up to be paied with heie or kurama if those too are unavaleable don't pair her with any one thanks oh yo update update update!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:23 CDT
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oppies! I forgot some things!!!she has pail skin slightly tan and pionted ears. and some more stuff to her history since she was 7 and along in human world she survived by a lady that took she in when she found her she left without a word at the age of 16 this is a good fic I like it update PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:07 CDT
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ok here is a charecter that I thout of(cant spell for shit) name:I dont know can you make up one for me?age:19 gender girlhistory:boarn in mikai family killed in frount of her eyes at the age of 7 sister died saveing her leting her escape to human world what dose your character wear?: a black thing that looks like a hooded cape or a long over coat w/ no sleevs and hood,(ongly wears it at night) skin tight lether pants, red v necked tank topwhat dose your charecter look like:hight,5'9 hair,waist leghth blue at the end and no bangs eyes,midnight blue silver arownd the edges body,slim tall tone what wepon dose your character use:spirit,orb that can get to any size she wants that explode on contact(she throwes them) normal wepon,whip aditudesarcastic,somtimes cold,silent,reliable and indapendant streanth: the thout of reverge weaknesshistory and the ones she loves(you know beacas of what happened to her sister)dont want to be with:kuabaka(can you tell I dont like him?)or koenma
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 22:39 CDT
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Name:Saku Age:18 History:Was taken from parents when very young.ever sense then she has been going back a forth to the worlds aimlessly ever sense Clothes:chinese atire thats red with gold designs Appearence:5,2 long black hair down to knees(always in a braid)dark evergreen eyes,naturally red lips Weapons:normal twin katanas Attiude:very quit,keeps to self,not good with new people, but does ajust Strength:Friends,her pride Weakness:emotions,past Who u want to be with:SINGLE.PLZ PLZ PLZ let me be in it I now I am very late,but I would be very thankful if u still put me in^_^
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Reviewed By: Masha On: June 16, 2004 21:39 CDT
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:53 CDT
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oh yeah,Kimba then we think same,i think...yeah...right?^^ teehee well laters^_^
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