| "the u.s.a spirit detectives?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:52 CDT
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its ok Kimba^^ its quiet alright^^ i'm just happy that your in^^ see you in the fic^^
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Reviewed By: kimba On: June 16, 2004 17:34 CDT
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this is to Lover_girl15-20, dude i'm soo soo sorry i didn't know that u had the same last name as i picked, i don't read the reviews with i put my person down... i guess great minds think alike... but any I'm SO SO SO sorry plz fogive me dude ^.^6;;
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Reviewed By: Kimba On: June 16, 2004 17:29 CDT
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DUDE I didn't know that some had the some last name as mine ... can u chage it.... err plz , i like being an olny child!( not to be mean)
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Reviewed By: kimba On: June 16, 2004 17:27 CDT
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i like chpater 1, one more thing if Sha still blame's Yoko for her fathers death, and was the one who put hin in tghe human world. update soo dude!
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh*^^ ok i'm reviewing too much right? oh well. i like your fic thats why^^ well i erally really really LOVE your fic and i can't wait anymore for your next chappie^^ its the best so far so please hurry and make the next chappter okies?^^ if your busy than just take your time^^ ~Solita Hitomi
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still waiting for that next chapter^^
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Reviewed By: Fe On: June 16, 2004 12:04 CDT
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Kitchel: age: As old as time itself gender: female wears: olive green pants; violet halter top with a brown jacket; black boots history: pretty good boxer; fights for all sorts of causes like animal rights; enjoys fighting large groups of people; vegetarian Weapons: Controls water; has a weapon that is a quarterstaff when blades are sheathed, when unsheathed there are two blades. Personality: Upbeat and outgoing; sometimes even hyper; she also enjoys freaking people out With: best friend Kyoko and fire unicorn named Passion Status: Remains single Strength: When underwater Weakness: She's kind of claustrophobic.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Lady of Myria On: June 16, 2004 11:05 CDT
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Name: Kusabana Otome Age: 500 yrs (whitch is young, for her) History: got separated from her parents at birth and grew up by herself (she has no morals whatsoever) Wear: BLUE! with sometimes a little silver Looks Like: green hair(dont ask) silver eyes 5'4" Weapon: katanas Attitude: loner (but can be very outgoing when shugar high)(doesnt drink caffene and/or alchohol) Strength: friends in danger Weakness: her cat (Zan) Partner: nobody (she hangs around for no reason)
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Title: Hiyas
Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh? wha? I read reviews and i have a twin?!? And i never knew?-_- i always get missed out on information^^ who's the twin where where?_> oh i see HIYA Sha! I'm happy that you have same personality and stuff like me HI!!!^^ but sorta knida wanted my own individuality but oh well back to author: Hiyas!! please update soon!! i'm itching for the next chapter..literally! love it!
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Title: Forgot something
Reviewed By: WereAngewomon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 09:15 CDT
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My last name is Shimamura. Okay? Great job so far please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sue- of hell On: June 16, 2004 09:15 CDT
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Hi. love your story and it's quiet cool. i sue copiers but your not one of them unlike some people on this site/fiction story >_>so that is good. you said you needed a male character am i correct? well i'll try to think of somethingup for one. and for all you mary sues and copy want to bes out there. i flame you all*laughs menacingly* well. please do work on the next chapter of your fiction soon.
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Reviewed By: JaCkLe On: June 16, 2004 09:07 CDT
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um....i'm JaCkLe and... are Sha and Solita like related or something or twins like that?....they uh..sorta sound like the same people...and....uh...Did Sha like...copy paste or something....like..ya...weird...right? and uh...great..like fic
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 08:54 CDT
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hope ya update soon^^
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Reviewed By: xXMidori-ChanXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kita is a fox demon. Her ears and tail is the same color as her hair, sorry I didnt put that in. ^.^"
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 07:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! more chapters!! thank you thank you thank you!! your da best your da greatest!! i absolutely LOVE your fic!!! i really hop you update soon okies^^ you got yourself a fic fan here!!*waves hands*
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