| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ferallove On: December 08, 2004 19:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. You catch the feelins of each moment perfectly. Please update soon, I am looking forward to the chapter.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 01, 2004 17:52 PST
Comment/Review:
great story. hurry up and update soon.
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Title: Another Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Can't wait until the next one!
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Reviewed By: whatever!! On: November 27, 2004 22:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this. your style of writing is so darn gd. update soon please!! please please please please i wanna know what happens next!
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Title: Neato story
Reviewed By: Kitsune of Darkness (too lazy to log in) On: November 27, 2004 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there I just found this fic and I truly wish I had caught it earlier for it is a great piece of work. I hope that you update soon. Till then ja
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 21:35 PST
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That was a really gooood chappie! It was... interesting. I feel bad for that Asian woman! And that poor girl!!! She's given up all hope AND her last bit of diginty!!! I feel really bad for her. I am greatly enjoying your fic. I like your style of writing and you capture every moment so well. Also I like the many details you put into your fic. I myself am a very detailed writer. Please continue to update and keep up the good work. Until next update... Ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: November 25, 2004 16:49 PST
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Aww, so she is with child. Will her master let her keep it? Huh? HUH?? No... her little Asian friend is going to die? NO!! *sniff sniff* Here you go again. You've actually made me cry... Excuse me while I get a Kleenex....*wahhhh!*
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Reviewed By: Youko_Akira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 07:23 PST
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Ooh, that last chapter is making me nervous. What will Youko and Yomi do when they find out she was exploring? You had best get that next chapter up soon.
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Title: Worthless Humans
Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 18:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Keep up the good work. I hope you update soon! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: Nightwing1555 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 12:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Koronue's falling in love with her and yeah for her she's survived for a year! Update, please?!
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Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 17:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job so far! update soon! and Nari's made it a year!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 10, 2004 14:59 PST
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good. i liked it. are you going to let nari keep the baby? or is it just a false pregnancy? please, if she is pregnant, let her keep the baby! and who would be the father? come on, you've got to update soon! please!?
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: November 10, 2004 14:03 PST
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It's been a year, and I'm sure to her, it must feel like an eternity. And the main question is.... IS she pregnant? Or, maybe not? That's the only confusing part, and I'm really REALLY starting to think that Kuronue does like her, even if he won't admit it. If she is pregnant however, please let it look like Kuronue... or, hehehe... it could be a mix of Kuronue and Kurama! o_0 (Is that even possible? Probably not) Great story though, and keep up the good work! Update again really soon! ^_^ Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 11:14 PST
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This is a very good story. Please update soon.
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Title: Hello Again!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 19:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sorry that I haven't reviewed in a LONG time! Been busy, busy! Great new chapters and will Nari turn cold as ice or stay the way she is? Will the sex-driven threesome continue to treat her like shit or learn to love her...well some of them? DUN, DUN, DUN!!! This wolf howls in sympathy for the girl with what seems like to have a future full of pain and suffering. AAAARRRROOOOO!!!!!!
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