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| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 06:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally the confession! I was worried that something would happen to Nari before Kuronue told her his true feelngs! Great chappy!
| Reviewed By: cateye91 On: June 24, 2005 14:28 PDT
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wow...wow...umm...wow...lol...this is a change from what i usually read but i luv it all the same...plz update for i really want 2 know what's gonna happen...and i do hope that kuronue starts to like nari more...
| Title: FABULOUS!!
Reviewed By: MorningJade On: June 07, 2005 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is incredible. Some of the spelling is wrong, but that's ok. We all do it. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! please update. I can't believe how good it is. I am a huge fan of your work. You are an amazingly talented author. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ^_^
| Reviewed By: sefiredoll On: June 06, 2005 04:39 PDT
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what a change! it is so refreshing to see something different from the usual fanfics. I sure enjoyed reading this! Go on, update and make us happy!
| Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 04, 2005 23:57 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that was...well...it was really amazing! the vocabulary that you used and your grammar is just some of the best i've seen in such a long time. this piece really shows that you put so much work into it, and you should be proud! as i read each chapter, i watched as you developed the plot and the characters at a nice, even pace, unlike some that may move to quickly, where you ask, "who are they?" but i found that i did not have to do that in this case. your writing really gave the life to the characters, to the point where i could sympathize for them. and i even soon found myself rooting for Kuronue and Nari, and each chapter left a good cliffhanger that led me to reading more. the ending was quite intriguing, though i had hoped that Nari would get back to the Human World, or Kuronue would at least proclaim his love for her in simple English. however, you left it open to that, in an eloquent way, and i love endings like that! you've got great writing ability, and i do hope that you continue to write, and that you will be further praised for such work!
| Reviewed By: kenela [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 23:00 PDT
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wow! this is the absolute best fic that i have ever read! U HAVE TO UPDATE!!! Its like im addicted to it or sumthing. although i am quite underage and shouldnt be reading this stuff, I HAFTA!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 03, 2005 20:09 PDT
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wow....chapter 5 really focuses on the relationship between Kuronue and Nari...i found myself hoping that in the future, they'll end up together...and almost at tears when Nari asked if she had displeased them...and it was so sweet when he had held her in his wings like that...wow...this was a really beautiful chapter, and as of yet, probably my favorite...
| Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 03, 2005 19:53 PDT
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hmmm...i might be over-analyzing this, but i think that Kuronue is kind of symbolic, in his character and such....he symbolizes the hope that may remain hidden, unless you think har enough, when there are terrible times...at least, that's what he seems to be to Nari in these first few chapters, a gleam of hope in Makai...anyways..wow..i'm just amazed that you could continue such a plot! it's simply inspiring! i still think that this is a wonderful story, and i do hope that you will continue to write...
| Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 03, 2005 19:38 PDT
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as someone before me had already stated, this story has things that are not the easiet topics to write about, such as sex, but you handle it quite eloquently...your usage of grammar and vocabulary make each chapter a worthwhile read, and this is probably going to be one of my favorite stories...i find myself often feeling badly for Nari, but this means that you have created a character that people could possibly sympathize with, and in these first few chapters, one can already see a change in the character...once again, beautiful writing!
| Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 03, 2005 19:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i think that my favorite despcription so far was the rose whip...it was short yet sweet, and still well-written...though there were some disturbing parts, as you did say, i think it enhances the theme and makes it clearer as to why and how the people were treated as lower than dirt...aw..Kuronue seems like such a compassionate little demon...XD...well..i'm sure that the next chapter is as equally exciting, so i'll be off! once again, beautiful writing!
| Reviewed By: Tangertine On: June 03, 2005 19:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finally got around to reading this, and it's absolutely amazing! for a first chapter, it really drew me in, and i found myself intrigued... well.. i'm off to read the next chapter.... and i hope that you continue to write, and continue to share your amazing work with many... ^^
| Reviewed By: kenela [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:13 PDT
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I LOVE IT!!! i just simple love your fic and u hafta update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: baka hanyou rahvin On: May 30, 2005 18:18 PDT
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ooo nice. please update soon. i want to know if they catch her or not. what will happen to okuro if she gets the shot? will she be able to keep him still?
| Reviewed By: Sesshi and Youko lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! I have been following this fanfiction for a long time, even though i'm a little underaged to be reading it. but, that's not the point. the fact is, this is the absolute greatest fanfiction I have ever read, I mean god, how do you do it. the emotion, the pain, its all so beautiful. And this chapter, was the greatest of them all! I could almost feel the raw emotion nari felt when she threw herself out that window. I would've done the same thing! well okay almost, I am the master of the art of cheap shots on guys and i so would've made a couple on yoko and yomi by now. But, nari's a bigger person then me so I understand why she doesn't. And sensui...he's a complete prick! and and poor okuro! left all alone! yoko or yomi might kill him!!! gah! but in closing let me just say...RUN FASTER NARI RUN FASTER!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Cleverbluefox On: May 30, 2005 12:58 PDT
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Gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh How could you stop there, damn. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!!!
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