| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:03 PDT
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Aww, pobre chica! Youko doesn't seem to understand that she is just a child! Poor kid! I hope she goes and bites him right on the....*a truck honks its horn* Good story though, and keep it up! Oh, when I get my hands on that fox...
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 13:59 PDT
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Wow, this is a great chapter! Don't be nervous! I like your story! It's really good, and it leaves me wanting to read more!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: anglc azn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:25 PDT
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Why is everyone so evil to Nari?!?!? ;__; won't there be love and peace around here? T_T Youko, Kourone, and Yomi: YOU MAKE US SOUND SOO CRUEL!!!
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Reviewed By: Midnighty On: October 14, 2004 13:43 PDT
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yep. still can't login. oh well. Absoulutly wonderful!!!! You must keep updating!
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Reviewed By: loneblackheart On: October 07, 2004 18:05 PDT
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Oh my god......you are such a good writer! Despite the horribality ( my word I just invented now), you've got me craving more. I commend your skills. *bows*
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Reviewed By: wolfyyy On: October 03, 2004 10:22 PDT
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Still can't login. damnit!!! anywho: I check for updates everyday! I love it! plz continue!
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Reviewed By: wolfyyy On: October 02, 2004 12:37 PDT
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coolness!!! plz update! midnight cannot login.. *growls*
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 20:12 PDT
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Oh my god!!! I dont even know what to say*speechless* This fic is so good and yet so sad. I feel so bad for that 14 year old girl. The poor thing. But this is a really good fic. Pleasee continue and update soon! Ja ne ^_^
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Title: HOWLINGLY AWESOME!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 On: September 18, 2004 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWOOOOWWWW!!!! HOWLINGLY AWESOME!!!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Linkin Park Rules On: September 16, 2004 13:30 PDT
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dances to Crawling wha-? oh okay. so much goody-ness! I love the hints of Kuronue and Nari! Oh you must let them get together! Okay Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Midnight_wolf(not logged in) On: September 16, 2004 13:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!! I love it more and more with every chapter you post! Are you not going allow her to go PMS? I still think that would be funny I don't care if you don't. By the Way: You keep typing "hay" it is "Hey" okay?
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Reviewed By: midnight(not logged in) On: August 28, 2004 18:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting better!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Souija the Medium [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 13:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, i was just amazed by the way you wrote this! you describe scenes so wonderfully and i feel so sorry for poor Nari! **cries** but a hint of Kuroune x Nari goodness is in the air. oh lala. I just love the fic, please write more soon ^_~
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Wolf_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 04:16 PDT
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oooooh! I LIKES!! ^_^ Evil story. Have her go PMS on Youko. That'd be funny. Is she gonna fall in love with kuronue?? HUH? HUH??? kuronue's hot... drool
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Reviewed By: kageko On: July 29, 2004 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wicked story!! i can't wait to read the rest of this :)
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