| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 17:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job so far! update soon! and Nari's made it a year!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 10, 2004 14:59 PST
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good. i liked it. are you going to let nari keep the baby? or is it just a false pregnancy? please, if she is pregnant, let her keep the baby! and who would be the father? come on, you've got to update soon! please!?
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: November 10, 2004 14:03 PST
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It's been a year, and I'm sure to her, it must feel like an eternity. And the main question is.... IS she pregnant? Or, maybe not? That's the only confusing part, and I'm really REALLY starting to think that Kuronue does like her, even if he won't admit it. If she is pregnant however, please let it look like Kuronue... or, hehehe... it could be a mix of Kuronue and Kurama! o_0 (Is that even possible? Probably not) Great story though, and keep up the good work! Update again really soon! ^_^ Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 11:14 PST
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This is a very good story. Please update soon.
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Title: Hello Again!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 19:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sorry that I haven't reviewed in a LONG time! Been busy, busy! Great new chapters and will Nari turn cold as ice or stay the way she is? Will the sex-driven threesome continue to treat her like shit or learn to love her...well some of them? DUN, DUN, DUN!!! This wolf howls in sympathy for the girl with what seems like to have a future full of pain and suffering. AAAARRRROOOOO!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loneblackheart On: November 06, 2004 21:58 PST
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Ugh....they're such bastards...Is poor Nari gonna be stuck there forever....?! *angry growl* My god, you're a good writer, this is one of the stories I look forward the most to being updated....update soon!
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Title: O.O Woah!
Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is quite unique in the way you convey it to the readers, but nonetheless it is very good. I like the fact that you can show the great depth emotion with this story, even though it can make the reader feel uh...despaired. Anyway, I hope you update sooooon! ;) I want to see if Nari can withstand the torture, abuse, and rape given to her by the 3 demon theives...I want to see if she doesn't die like all the other humans before her.
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Reviewed By: Midnightwolf On: October 26, 2004 14:54 PDT
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NOOO!!! SHE SHALL NOT DIE!!!! *sobs* oh sorry. So good!! WONDERFUL!! BEAUTIFUL!!! EXCESSIVE USE OF EXCLAMATION POINTS!! update plz!!
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 14:41 PDT
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@_@ *speechless* ... *lobg pause* I dont even know what to say... That was a really good chappie. I feel bad for all those women and the 14 year old girl. I cant believe Kuruone showed her that horible place. I guess she needed to see it to toughen her up. Poor thing...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:32 PDT
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That's just horrible! They kill the woman's child, even if it is theirs as well? What bastards!! >:( And why did kuronue show her that? Doesn't he know it'll give her nightmares?? Demons... they can be such pricks at times...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:22 PDT
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That some deep bath tub! With how short I am, I could probably do a dive, and still not be able to touch the bottom! *beams proudly* But then... being stuck with a demon, I dunno... Great chapter, and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:18 PDT
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Woah! They're taking humans illegally?? Bad demons! Bad! Hell, I would've run, too! I hate thunderstorms, and rainstorms, and snowstorms and.... enough of my rambling...*ahem* good chapter.
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:13 PDT
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Oh my God... Yomi praised her? Yomi did?! O_O I seriously think he just lost his marbles.... I knew it! I knew it!! Kuronue DOES like her, even if he is unwilling to admit it just yet...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:10 PDT
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Hey, does she make any friends while she is there? Or is she gonna be all by her lonesome?? She should have some friends, whether it be the oriental lady or the chic at the food table. Or maybe Yomi... just kidding...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:06 PDT
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Hey, is it me, or does Kuronue seems to like her? Ya know, even if it is just a little bit... >_> _
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