| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: loneblackheart On: November 06, 2004 21:58 PST
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Ugh....they're such bastards...Is poor Nari gonna be stuck there forever....?! *angry growl* My god, you're a good writer, this is one of the stories I look forward the most to being updated....update soon!
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Title: O.O Woah!
Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is quite unique in the way you convey it to the readers, but nonetheless it is very good. I like the fact that you can show the great depth emotion with this story, even though it can make the reader feel uh...despaired. Anyway, I hope you update sooooon! ;) I want to see if Nari can withstand the torture, abuse, and rape given to her by the 3 demon theives...I want to see if she doesn't die like all the other humans before her.
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Reviewed By: Midnightwolf On: October 26, 2004 14:54 PDT
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NOOO!!! SHE SHALL NOT DIE!!!! *sobs* oh sorry. So good!! WONDERFUL!! BEAUTIFUL!!! EXCESSIVE USE OF EXCLAMATION POINTS!! update plz!!
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 14:41 PDT
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@_@ *speechless* ... *lobg pause* I dont even know what to say... That was a really good chappie. I feel bad for all those women and the 14 year old girl. I cant believe Kuruone showed her that horible place. I guess she needed to see it to toughen her up. Poor thing...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:32 PDT
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That's just horrible! They kill the woman's child, even if it is theirs as well? What bastards!! >:( And why did kuronue show her that? Doesn't he know it'll give her nightmares?? Demons... they can be such pricks at times...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:22 PDT
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That some deep bath tub! With how short I am, I could probably do a dive, and still not be able to touch the bottom! *beams proudly* But then... being stuck with a demon, I dunno... Great chapter, and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:18 PDT
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Woah! They're taking humans illegally?? Bad demons! Bad! Hell, I would've run, too! I hate thunderstorms, and rainstorms, and snowstorms and.... enough of my rambling...*ahem* good chapter.
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:13 PDT
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Oh my God... Yomi praised her? Yomi did?! O_O I seriously think he just lost his marbles.... I knew it! I knew it!! Kuronue DOES like her, even if he is unwilling to admit it just yet...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:10 PDT
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Hey, does she make any friends while she is there? Or is she gonna be all by her lonesome?? She should have some friends, whether it be the oriental lady or the chic at the food table. Or maybe Yomi... just kidding...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:06 PDT
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Hey, is it me, or does Kuronue seems to like her? Ya know, even if it is just a little bit... >_> _
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Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 14:03 PDT
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Aww, pobre chica! Youko doesn't seem to understand that she is just a child! Poor kid! I hope she goes and bites him right on the....*a truck honks its horn* Good story though, and keep it up! Oh, when I get my hands on that fox...
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed-in) On: October 26, 2004 13:59 PDT
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Wow, this is a great chapter! Don't be nervous! I like your story! It's really good, and it leaves me wanting to read more!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: anglc azn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:25 PDT
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Why is everyone so evil to Nari?!?!? ;__; won't there be love and peace around here? T_T Youko, Kourone, and Yomi: YOU MAKE US SOUND SOO CRUEL!!!
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Reviewed By: Midnighty On: October 14, 2004 13:43 PDT
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yep. still can't login. oh well. Absoulutly wonderful!!!! You must keep updating!
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Reviewed By: loneblackheart On: October 07, 2004 18:05 PDT
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Oh my god......you are such a good writer! Despite the horribality ( my word I just invented now), you've got me craving more. I commend your skills. *bows*
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