| "Beauty Contest Judge- Yugi?!" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: August 08, 2004 15:57 EDT
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Cools. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 07, 2004 01:09 EDT
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make more and i wish i can be in it.
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Reviewed By: Sword Master Jeff On: August 05, 2004 14:50 EDT
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This was great, but I think I know why fanfiction.net is taking away your stories. It's because of the fact that you ask the readers some questions with the fic, letting them interact with it. I don't know what the problem with that is, but the staff don't like it. I believe that is the reason that so many of your stories are being deleted from this site, but that is a little outrageous if you ask me.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 17:30 EDT
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Glad to help DJ. ^^ And I can forgive the short chapter if you have exams. I like the Unhappy Maiden. ^^ Yugi's so sweet! I'll see if I can send in some fanart...I'll try, but if you don't get any from me, then I can't. Sorry in advance. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 (Not Logged on) On: August 04, 2004 15:30 EDT
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Me: I don't care that it was short the point is it was a good chapter. Thanks for using some of the stuff I suggested. Laura: DJ about the fanart. Like Lady D said she is no Kazuki Takahashi. However she is willing to try her best and she is thinking of using a digital camera with parent's permission. Britt: Yeah but don't be surprised if Lady D's fanart isn't the pretty. She pretty much sucks at anime drawing including hands and heads. Me: Girls stop insulting me! Anyway I loved how you put in the Unhappy Maiden I have that card and I love the art on it. Also I really love that Ra's Store thing. It was really ironic in a funny way! ^_^ Laura: We really look forward to when the duel monster girls become Yugi's Guardian Angels. Britt: Heh, heh yeah the duel monster girls are like Charlie's Angels... only there more then three, and they only have one mission, and they made the mission themselves, and they don't suck. Me: *Rolls eyes* Update soon. Signed, Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 04, 2004 14:27 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 28, 2004 23:14 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 28, 2004 23:14 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 26, 2004 15:44 EDT
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please make more.
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 26, 2004 15:43 EDT
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I wish i can be on this fanfiction but i sure can't let me go on it (sigh oh well, i never be on fan fiction anyway) by way maybe one them should wear swimming suit that cover their bottoms and on top only cover their nipples. And poor Yugi, if I was in this story I would enter the pageant for 3 reasons I want to get Yami attention, I one of his big fan and want get to see judges in person and it sounds like fun. And I would like to help Yugi with the fan girls, like hide him in my house until there gone or something. 1.) Evening wear- . And it a silk red with some glitter on it and some of breast will be showing and I also wear gloves that reach up my elbows and I will have my hair curled and I will wear necklace that looks like millennium necklace but it shape like a heart, and ruby earrings that are shaped like a heart and I will also wear red leather high heel shoes. 2.) Swimsuits-, Bathing suit: a two piece red bikinis that had glitter on it and some of my breast will showing and I will wear red high heel and my hair will be in ponytail and I wish can I will wink at yami and give him kiss on the cheek too and Yugi too. 3.) Talent- Singing, Walk To Remember by Many Moore.
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 26, 2004 15:43 EDT
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I wish i can be on this fanfiction but i sure can't let me go on it (sigh oh well, i never be on fan fiction anyway) by way maybe one them should wear swimming suit that cover their bottoms and on top only cover their nipples. And poor Yugi, if I was in this story I would enter the pageant for 3 reasons I want to get Yami attention, I one of his big fan and want get to see judges in person and it sounds like fun. And I would like to help Yugi with the fan girls, like hide him in my house until there gone or something. 1.) Evening wear- . And it a silk red with some glitter on it and some of breast will be showing and I also wear gloves that reach up my elbows and I will have my hair curled and I will wear necklace that looks like millennium necklace but it shape like a heart, and ruby earrings that are shaped like a heart and I will also wear red leather high heel shoes. 2.) Swimsuits-, Bathing suit: a two piece red bikinis that had glitter on it and some of my breast will showing and I will wear red high heel and my hair will be in ponytail and I wish can I will wink at yami and give him kiss on the cheek too and Yugi too. 3.) Talent- Singing, Walk To Remember by Many Moore.
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: July 16, 2004 20:25 EDT
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Heh. On spur sense of evil, I could make everyone fall alsleep with my flute (Not in a bad way) but with sleeping powder then me and Jacquelyn can grab Yami and make a run for it. He's the REAL prize for us. *insert evil laugh*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:13 EDT
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Cool, another chapter. Poor Yugi, no bodyguards or security for him. Yay, you used one of my ideas! Sorry DJ, I would try to send my crappy drawing to you, but I have no scanner. :p Oh, how I suffer. Please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Hey DJ, another great chapter that was here, and I feel sorry for Yugi now that Yugi has to worry about all those fangirls of his in both worlds. Not only that, but also that he will feel really torn when choosing because he doesn't want to hurt any of his friends feelings. Also, I've noticed that people read my stories, but no one reviews them!
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:55 EDT
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Me: Sorry DJ I can't draw fanart to save my life. As much as I want to. But I just can't draw nor I can I send fanart due to the fact that my family doesn't have a scanner. But anyway it was a good chapter. Brittany: Poor Yugi. Me: Are you saying that out of pity? Brittany: ^_^; Yeah kinda Me: *Hits Britt on the head* You are such an idiot. Laura: Well like Lady D said, it was a good chapter. Can't wait to see the rest. Signed, Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura
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