| "Beauty Contest Judge- Yugi?!" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: MD 1428 On: August 18, 2004 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man dj I've been reading your stuff for some time now and I gotta say this is awesome I can't help but wonder which girl yugi gonna end up with personal I'd like to see mana get togather with him there aren't enough DMG fics out there period and after the last one you wrote I would love to see another I thoght about answearing that challange of your's but unfortunatly I wouldn't be able to put it on FF.net or Mediaminer because I don't own my own computer and have to use the public librays computers but if you would like to see it I can e-mail it to you drop me a line if your interested my email's Midnight_defender_1428@yaoo.com later man
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 18, 2004 01:19 EDT
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i am in one of your reveiws
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 18, 2004 01:19 EDT
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i am in one of your reveiws
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Reviewed By: erika On: August 17, 2004 22:02 EDT
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i may be a yami fan but that doesn't mean i don't care about yugi, it must be annoy to have the fan girls around.
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Reviewed By: erika On: August 17, 2004 21:57 EDT
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1.) What do you say about Yugi's actions towards Keiko? i think it was sweet. 2.) What do you think about Delia's choice of swimwear, as well as her choice of words? i am not sure. 3.) What do you say about Mai's actions right now? What would you like to do to her? i think that wasn't right and i would keep yugi away from her. 4.) Would you like to be a part of Yugi's Angels? i would like to proctect him from the fangirls and i would like to enter the contest and get a date with yami.
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: August 17, 2004 21:15 EDT
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Oh...my....god....that was the one of the funniest frickin chappies I have ever seen in my life!! Yami has decided to mingle with the commoners. (Marik and Bakura) This was one hell of a chappie! Now to answer da questions! 1) Yugi is so frickin nice to everyone. I'm serious. If he found me lying in an alley afterI'd was beaten by thugs, he'd take care of me. I can always reliy on him. Go Yugi! 2) Delia....she was incredibly disturbing. And I'm sorry Yugi but she sounded inconceited. *shudders* I hate people like that. 3) Mai's actions....she has no right to do that! *puts on ref outfit* Pentalty! romancing off the set! That's not cool! I would save Yugi right now!! Then leave the Yugi fangirls to go kick her ass. 4) Can I be one of Yugi's sexy bodyguards instead? Like the MIB? That'd be awesome. Then Yugi would at least have SOME protection. I'll keep on him at all times! Though I'm a Yami fangirl. He's mine! *glomps Yami* I'd love to be at your partay! Can I be Yami's date? If I was Yugi's I'd have ALOT of girls AND female duel monsters coming after my blood. ^-^; I'll bring some food and candy! Tons of pixie stix! Yugi's got to have pixie stix. And I saw the movie at it's first showing on the first day! Oh! that movie kicks ass. Do you have the soundtrack? get the soundtrack. Anyway update soon! I need my Yami-kun!
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura On: August 17, 2004 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: Great job DJ, loved the chapter. I always did wonder about the Succubus Knight. Also that little scene, it seemed very accurate considering what a Succubus is. Brittany: Also about the whole test thing. Great job DJ, congrats. Also yes the movie was awesome. Finally about Yugi's little question about any girls wanting to be his date. Well let's just say Laura's face now matches her hair. Laura: *Snaps out of blushing* I'd love to be Yugi's date for the party. Anyway for the questions. 1. Now see, this is why I love him. He is the kindest and purest heart I know. 2. *Pissed* OH THAT LITTLE! LET ME AT HER! 3. Don't give me any ideas DJ. 4. Hell yeah! Me: You can count us in. Britt: Us? Laura: Yes all three of us. Problem? Britt: No not at all Me: Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:40 EDT
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And, uh, can I be Yugi's date? I think I said that in the first review, but...
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:37 EDT
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Ooh! Ooh! Pick me! ^^ Hey, you saw the movie too? It was pretty good, wasn't it? Well, I think it was really sweet of Yugi to help out Keiko. And I completely hate Mai's actions toward Yugi, and Delia's choice of words and swim wear. I wouldn't want to hurt Mai... just make sure that she won't be given a chance to participate in the Beauty Contest. Well, maybe hurt her a little bit... and I'd love to be part of Yugi's angels! ^^ Great job on the two summmer college classes by the way. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: wing white angel On: August 13, 2004 18:12 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon of Egypt On: August 09, 2004 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD:well DJ u should go to Janime.biz and ask them im sure they have some pictures they have done and if not that u can ask Solitare and xpyne and uh Klonoa they have some good pictures or friends who have some ask them they might be able to help u out and s for what i just saw awwwthat was sooooo sweet of yugi he really is an absolute angel i swear he is and really so what if hes not superstar or major move celeb hes still is the absolute best with a heart as rich as gold and as pure an uncut flawless diamond hehe well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW and keep up the great work hehe though i do feel sry for yugi getting stuck in a horrible fix plus i just wanta pound yami into the ground after what he did huh *shrugs* oh well cya ^__^
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: August 08, 2004 15:57 EDT
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Cools. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 07, 2004 01:09 EDT
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make more and i wish i can be in it.
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Reviewed By: Sword Master Jeff On: August 05, 2004 14:50 EDT
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This was great, but I think I know why fanfiction.net is taking away your stories. It's because of the fact that you ask the readers some questions with the fic, letting them interact with it. I don't know what the problem with that is, but the staff don't like it. I believe that is the reason that so many of your stories are being deleted from this site, but that is a little outrageous if you ask me.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 17:30 EDT
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Glad to help DJ. ^^ And I can forgive the short chapter if you have exams. I like the Unhappy Maiden. ^^ Yugi's so sweet! I'll see if I can send in some fanart...I'll try, but if you don't get any from me, then I can't. Sorry in advance. Please update soon!
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