| "Beauty Contest Judge- Yugi?!" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 (Not Logged on) On: August 04, 2004 15:30 EDT
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Me: I don't care that it was short the point is it was a good chapter. Thanks for using some of the stuff I suggested. Laura: DJ about the fanart. Like Lady D said she is no Kazuki Takahashi. However she is willing to try her best and she is thinking of using a digital camera with parent's permission. Britt: Yeah but don't be surprised if Lady D's fanart isn't the pretty. She pretty much sucks at anime drawing including hands and heads. Me: Girls stop insulting me! Anyway I loved how you put in the Unhappy Maiden I have that card and I love the art on it. Also I really love that Ra's Store thing. It was really ironic in a funny way! ^_^ Laura: We really look forward to when the duel monster girls become Yugi's Guardian Angels. Britt: Heh, heh yeah the duel monster girls are like Charlie's Angels... only there more then three, and they only have one mission, and they made the mission themselves, and they don't suck. Me: *Rolls eyes* Update soon. Signed, Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura
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Reviewed By: Erika On: August 04, 2004 14:27 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 28, 2004 23:14 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 28, 2004 23:14 EDT
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make more
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 26, 2004 15:44 EDT
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please make more.
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 26, 2004 15:43 EDT
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I wish i can be on this fanfiction but i sure can't let me go on it (sigh oh well, i never be on fan fiction anyway) by way maybe one them should wear swimming suit that cover their bottoms and on top only cover their nipples. And poor Yugi, if I was in this story I would enter the pageant for 3 reasons I want to get Yami attention, I one of his big fan and want get to see judges in person and it sounds like fun. And I would like to help Yugi with the fan girls, like hide him in my house until there gone or something. 1.) Evening wear- . And it a silk red with some glitter on it and some of breast will be showing and I also wear gloves that reach up my elbows and I will have my hair curled and I will wear necklace that looks like millennium necklace but it shape like a heart, and ruby earrings that are shaped like a heart and I will also wear red leather high heel shoes. 2.) Swimsuits-, Bathing suit: a two piece red bikinis that had glitter on it and some of my breast will showing and I will wear red high heel and my hair will be in ponytail and I wish can I will wink at yami and give him kiss on the cheek too and Yugi too. 3.) Talent- Singing, Walk To Remember by Many Moore.
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Reviewed By: Erika On: July 26, 2004 15:43 EDT
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I wish i can be on this fanfiction but i sure can't let me go on it (sigh oh well, i never be on fan fiction anyway) by way maybe one them should wear swimming suit that cover their bottoms and on top only cover their nipples. And poor Yugi, if I was in this story I would enter the pageant for 3 reasons I want to get Yami attention, I one of his big fan and want get to see judges in person and it sounds like fun. And I would like to help Yugi with the fan girls, like hide him in my house until there gone or something. 1.) Evening wear- . And it a silk red with some glitter on it and some of breast will be showing and I also wear gloves that reach up my elbows and I will have my hair curled and I will wear necklace that looks like millennium necklace but it shape like a heart, and ruby earrings that are shaped like a heart and I will also wear red leather high heel shoes. 2.) Swimsuits-, Bathing suit: a two piece red bikinis that had glitter on it and some of my breast will showing and I will wear red high heel and my hair will be in ponytail and I wish can I will wink at yami and give him kiss on the cheek too and Yugi too. 3.) Talent- Singing, Walk To Remember by Many Moore.
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: July 16, 2004 20:25 EDT
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Heh. On spur sense of evil, I could make everyone fall alsleep with my flute (Not in a bad way) but with sleeping powder then me and Jacquelyn can grab Yami and make a run for it. He's the REAL prize for us. *insert evil laugh*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:13 EDT
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Cool, another chapter. Poor Yugi, no bodyguards or security for him. Yay, you used one of my ideas! Sorry DJ, I would try to send my crappy drawing to you, but I have no scanner. :p Oh, how I suffer. Please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Hey DJ, another great chapter that was here, and I feel sorry for Yugi now that Yugi has to worry about all those fangirls of his in both worlds. Not only that, but also that he will feel really torn when choosing because he doesn't want to hurt any of his friends feelings. Also, I've noticed that people read my stories, but no one reviews them!
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:55 EDT
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Me: Sorry DJ I can't draw fanart to save my life. As much as I want to. But I just can't draw nor I can I send fanart due to the fact that my family doesn't have a scanner. But anyway it was a good chapter. Brittany: Poor Yugi. Me: Are you saying that out of pity? Brittany: ^_^; Yeah kinda Me: *Hits Britt on the head* You are such an idiot. Laura: Well like Lady D said, it was a good chapter. Can't wait to see the rest. Signed, Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura
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Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: July 16, 2004 11:20 EDT
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My talent is singing. Singing R&B songs like "Naughty Girl" by Beyonce. Let me give you more details about my dress that I mentioned above. It will be down to my ankles and it has a slit on the left side and the jewelry that I want to wear is real diamond earrings,gold arm bracelet and my Millennium Charmbracelet. That's all.
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: July 16, 2004 11:15 EDT
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You're welcome of the ideas in this fic. The evening wear that I want to wear in the pagent is a red V-shaped silk dress with a real diamond straps and gold high heel sandals. I want my hair to be in curls and I want to get Yami's attention to me because I'm a big fan of him *giggles* Well, I think your story is going great because you have some good themes and plots in your story to make it more interesting and popular among other people. I have an idea. Whenever it's my turn to go on stage for the pagent, make Yugi and Yami blush tomato red when they see me in my bikini and evening wear clothing. Did I mention the color of my bikini? Just in case you don't remember, I'll give it to you again. It's a hot pink bikini with real diamonds on it and glitter on it. That will get Yami's full attention to me *giggles* Well, I hope you update soon and thanks again and may god bless you.
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: July 16, 2004 10:53 EDT
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OMG!!! OMFG!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! I love you SO much!! *giggles like a silly schoolgirl* Okay. So, by the way the chapter was written I'd have to say that I get to be in the contest! Cool. So that means I have to give you guys my dresses and talent ne? Very well. Evening: A pure white dress that ties up around my neck. It has a semi-low back cut and has sequins along the side. Reaches down to my ankles and has a matching tiara. (so girly....sort of) Swimsuit: Let's see... Royal blue string bikini with hawaiian flowers. Talent: God I don't know what to use as my talent. Hm...I can play the flute and piano really well. You can use either instrument. As for fan art, I can't draw for crap. I'd ask my friend but she is already tied up with some drawings some people asked for. I'll try anyway. I have a question though. Will the girls who are helping with the pact go into action anytime soon? Okay. I think I've ranted enough now. Thanks again for putting me in and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: July 14, 2004 11:29 EDT
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I was on vacation for a while. I'm sorry I couldn't review. But I'll try and help in any way I can. I can't think up any ideas at the moment so I won't be much help right now. This story is really great. I know that it will be well written. I also realize that Yamifanner and me are having a dispute over who gets Yami. Even though, I admit, this is selfish of me to do this, I am bringing up a simple fact. If you are going to allow one of us to be paired with Yami, it should be me simply because I asked first. Again I realize that this is really selfish but it is also fact. I apologize for my selfishness. If you don't pick me, well, that's the way the cookie crumbles. I'll still try and review because this is one of my favorite YGO stories. Good luck and please update soon!
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