| "Beauty Contest Judge- Yugi?!" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sword Master Jeff On: June 28, 2004 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey DJ, I have one question that concerns the Shadow Realm. How is possible for Yugi to stay alive while he's in there, especially with what happened to him with Pegasus. Also, why does everybody name the Dark Magician Girl Mana? Okay so I meant two questions. I actually like this story, as well as the pact that the Duel Monsters made.
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Title: Deimos being a Jugde
Reviewed By: Erick-Genryusai On: June 25, 2004 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that Deimos, the Angel of Hell's a Jugde...things will get very interrsting from here...Thanks D.J for picking me as a Jugde. Yugi's gonna be in a way'hard challenge... Now what will he do when all those girls -(Human and Duel Monsters)- try to talk to Yugi to vote for them... This will be the greatess challenge Yugi has ever faced to... If he thought that the battles against Pegasus, Kaiba, Noah and Yami-Marik were tought...they were only a walk in the park compared to his ultimate one. Be Brave Yugi... And...why not add funny scenes to the story... Like sabotage from the girls to each others, as well as cat fights. In the Swimsuit competition...Mai and Ishizu may have lot of competition. In the Evening Gown competion...Tea and Serenity...cause they're cute. In the Duel Monster Competition...Mai and Ishizu will have the field advantage...cause Mai's a sesionary Veteran, and Ishizu' too...lets not forget that Ishizu 'almost' defeated Seto Kaiba in the Battle City Finals. Those girls will get cream by Mai and Ishizu. Well...lets wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Beauty Contest Judge-Yugi?!
Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man. OH,MAN! You know I feel sorry for Yugi, (grumbles. Lucky, son of a gun). Yugi, I'm praying for you lil' homey.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:29 EDT
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Hehehe... I look forward to watching the chaos unfold. I completely agree to the pact the Duel Monsters made! Poor Yugi and his innocent little mind... Ok, I want to join your story! Name: Miranda Evening wear: Spahgetti strap black and crimson knee length dress with black heels. Swimsuit: dark blue bikini. Talent: Electric guitar/singing= 'I love Rock'n'Roll' This is gonna be sooo much fun. ^-^
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Blah! On: June 22, 2004 22:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Is Blue Eyes White Dragon (aka Kisara) in the Duel Monsters Beauty comptetition as well?
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Title: We're baaaack!
Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Me: Hey DJ remember us? Brittany: The story was funny and cute the first and it is the second time. Laura: Anyway time to put my info. Name: Laura M Wells Appearence: Waist length red hair usually in low ponytail, emerald green eyes. Pre-Pagaent- A black T-shirt that says "What you expected "Brat" in glittery letters?", baggy black jeans, black sandals. Evening Wear- Forest green ankle length dress with see-through sleeves. Swinsuit- Black two-piece Talent- Singing Questions 1. I so agree with the pact! 2. Hell yeah! 3. There is no way in Hell that I would act like those SLUTS! Me: Um Laura isn't "sluts" a little much? Laura: *Glares* Brittany: You know DJ, it would be really cool if in the story, the duel monsters went to the real world and some human girls decided to join the pact. Me: Anyway update soon. Signed. Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura
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Title: More Info
Reviewed By: Isis-san On: June 22, 2004 11:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah I forgot to give you info. Name: Katiu What She Wears: White tank top that says 'Goddess' in black. Black capris and black clogs. Dirty Blonde and chocolate brown eyes. She can have Shadow Magic if you want.
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Title: Yami, let me have Yami
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: June 22, 2004 11:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
I want Yami. Can I have him?? Huh??? I just love Yami alot. If another girl has Yami, we can fight over him and I don't care.
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Title: Pick me
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: June 22, 2004 11:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to join your story. Name:Jacquelyn Evening wear:a red dress that comes up to thighs with diamonds(real) and glitter on it,silver high heel sandals. Swimsuit:a pink bikini with diamond straps and diamonds(real) on it. Talent:singing(R&B music). I hope to be in your story. Sorry to have the same thing on my last review twice.
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Reviewed By: Isis-san On: June 22, 2004 11:33 EDT
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This is very cool. I'd like to join the pact. I need to help Yugi!! He's so kawaii! However, I don't want to be like Anzu, Mai etc. I just want to help Yugi. Since he's my second favorite character. Yami's my favorite. Can I be with Yami? Pwese? If you put me in I'll just go by Katiu. Okay? Cool! Please update soon!
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Title: Pick me
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: June 22, 2004 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to join your story. Name:Jacquelyn Evening wear:a red dress that comes up to thighs with diamonds(real) and glitter on it,silver high heel sandals. Swimsuit:a pink bikini with diamond straps and diamonds(real) on it.
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