| "Portrait Without Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Title: Really into this story
Reviewed By: Neinusan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say you've done another wonderful job. I'm really into this story! Love how you depict the chapters. I am ever constant watching for your updates. Oh, and...thanks, you don't know what it means to me.
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Title: Beautiful Job!
Reviewed By: tertai On: July 01, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful job! Loved how you went into deeper detail on certain parts! Bitch-slapped, that's a good one! I wondered what was in that note Ryo gave him. Once simple word... you just make me cry... for more! Please, please don't leave us hanging too long before you update!
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Reviewed By: sirencirce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I am enjoying this fic much more than I thought I would...it's just soooo sad. I still like though (a little angst is good for the constitution). I hope Dee finds happiness soon, he really deserves it. Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm very impressed.
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Title: Lady Lunara
Reviewed By: Lady Lunara [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheer brilliance, I love this story, it's so very raw and to the core, Please update as soon as possible I truely adore your writing style and you choice of topic, it kicks ass. I think there might have been a minor sp error but w/e it was still awesome. Keep it up
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Title: Great Chapters
Reviewed By: greenclover On: June 30, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great chapters on Dee! You can really feel how upset and hurt he is. Loved the detail of what happened between him and Ryo to get Ryo in trouble. And it was just too much to know exactly what Ryo had written on the note he gave him. That had me crying again! Please continue with this story!
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Title: Difficult Not To Feel
Reviewed By: Neinusan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very glad to see that you have corrected any problems that I created with the site and story. I just hope you were able to do the same with anything else I may have done. I just wanted to let you know that I've still been reading your story, and think you've done a terrific job with it. You put a lot of emotion into each character, and find it difficult not to feel the deep pain and frustration of what they are going through. I will be anxiously waiting to read what you come up with in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: tertai On: June 28, 2004 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this chapter. First you had Ryo's side of things and now you have a deeper view from Dee's part. Great job interconnecting the two like that. Eager to read more, though I need to get more tissues.
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Reviewed By: wakinyan (wakinyan_koa@yahoo.com) On: June 28, 2004 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really is something else! Really great spin you have on the relationship of the two. You really make me cry. Please,... I really like to read more.
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Reviewed By: sirencirce(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Dee! *Wails* I just want to hug him and tell him everything will be okay. You must continue...I demand it.
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Title: Twist that knife
Reviewed By: tertai On: June 26, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply in tears! You have a way of twisting that knife. Wonderful writing. Look forward to read more.
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Title: Have To Have More
Reviewed By: greenclover On: June 25, 2004 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an amazing talent in writing this fic. If Ryo truly has been unfaithful, you really have a way of making a person really feel like crying for him instead of think 'that's what you get'. Please do write more soon. It hurts so much I have to have more.
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Reviewed By: sirencirce (to lazy to logon again) On: June 25, 2004 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hugs* Gods don't it make you want to cry!!! I love it though. *sniffles and grabs tissues* You can't stop now...i need more...it's a drug i'm telling you!
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Title: Hurt More?
Reviewed By: greenclover On: June 23, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first couple of chapters really threw me for a loop. It was really harsh, and you certainly had Dee on the edge of being dangerous there. The next chapter really captured a lot of emotions. Poor Dee. So tough but really can hurt. And the last one I just finished, has me really feeling bad for Ryo. Is there any way you can make things hurt more? I think that there's still part of my guts that haven't been grounded into mush, and I've got a few tissues left. Can you please update soon?
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Title: I'm very, very sorry
Reviewed By: Neinusan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 13:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't know how else to reach you since you won't take my calls or respond to the emails, so I figured I would write you here. You have every right to be angry and not want to talk or see me. I truly did not mean to delete your story off the site or screw up anything else on the computer. I only meant to read the new chapter you put up and leave a review, but I didn't realize you were logged into the site. I should have stopped there, but then I got in some places I shouldn't have, got nervous and panicked, and trying to hid the fact made it worse. You know the rest from there. You had every right to angry and upset, and I don't blame you if you won't have anything to do with me now. After you were kind enough to become my friend, and all that you've done for me in the short time we've known each other, that I did something like this. You haven't allowed me to reach you, and if I could, I would bow down in front of you with my head on the floor to tell you how very, very sorry I am. I don't know what else to say. You are really an amazing person that I have been was fortunate to get to know. It's all my fault for not listening about not bothering your computer. I'm very ashamed for breaking your trust, and I sincerely hope that you are able to correct anything I screwed up. I know how upset you are with me right now, but I am hoping that you will forgive me, even if it's not for a while yet. I still want you to be my friend. Please?
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Title: Really moving
Reviewed By: wakinyan wakinyan_koa@yahoo.com On: June 23, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This piece is real moves a person to tears. I need to read more.
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