| "Captive Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO THIS IS GETTING GOOD
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 25, 2004 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice update =)
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster On: June 25, 2004 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sure you plan to get to this eventually, but I'm a bit confused as to why InuYasha and Sesshomoru need Kagome. You need a better reason then what you've given so far. Sure she's pretty, but there are an awful lot of prettier Demonesses I'm sure. I don't know your plan for the story, and I look forward to reading it ot find out, but maybe the reasons they want Kagome specifically is they sense the strong magic around her that allows only her to pass through time? Maybe the Shikon is like a pheromone in her that draws demons to her? I don't know, just thoughts. Keep up the good story telling!
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Title: Amreld
Reviewed By: Stolen Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good story! but you really should work on your grammar. I have to say it sucks major ass. You should see if anyone would like to be a beta reader. I would, but I alredy have enough on my hands from my own story. ^_^ Ja ne! Keep writing! Amreld
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Reviewed By: Eternal Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Sesshoumaru/Kagome/InuYasha fics are so rare and I love that triangle! And I'm not against Kouga either...*giggles* anyway! This is a very good fic, well written and with lots of description. I love when Seshsoumaru goes all possessive of Kagome! Can't wait till the mating starts! PLease hurry up with the next chapter! I can't wait to read more! Eternal Cosmos
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey no fair!!! kagomes lucky now!! two hot demons with her*drools* oh well update^^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOO YUMMY
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 24, 2004 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting .. =)
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good keep up the good work.update soon
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